Beginnings of a long FMA gen-fic

[shamera]

Okay, so this is the roughest rough draft I've done in a very long while, and it really shouldn't be posted here without at least some semblence of proofreading, but I haven't posted anything here in a while (so I feel vaguely guilty) and the flist on my other journal seems pretty busy right now so people haven't had time to beta stuff for me

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[lunefin]

...does the fact that this is a rough draft mean there's no more story for quite a while?
Whimpers and dies.
I like this story _that_ much.