Fic: Hurting You and Me

May 21, 2011 12:49



Title: Hurting You and Me
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melodious329 May 22 2011, 02:26:18 UTC
Oh this is so great. It leaves so much open to the imagination (though I'd love if you felt the need to answer our curiosity), and I love a hurt!Chris. But I looove a fic where what you see isn't what you get, where people are more complex than they appear and I thought you did a great job with interweaving what's known and unknown so it didnt feel incomplete.

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shaming_jezebel May 22 2011, 21:49:07 UTC
What more are you curious about? I like these two so could be persuaded to write more...;)

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melodious329 May 23 2011, 01:14:49 UTC
Well, mainly why Steve hit Chris? But you could also write about how they got together to begin with, how things went the very next time they saw each other after this fight, how they had rekindled the relationship...or you could write how Steve finally manages to worm his way back into Christian's heart :) LOL I'm great at thinking of bunnies

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shaming_jezebel May 23 2011, 19:48:52 UTC
Cool...I will dwell on that...might be able to extend this out with some thought :)

Ideas, like Chris and Steve, do tend to mate like bunnies...

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debarouchi May 28 2011, 22:15:24 UTC
I'm curious to know why Steve felt the need to throw a punch at his Christian too. Great to see the turn around where it's Steve doing the hurting instead of Chris which we tend to see more of. Thanks for sharing :)

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shaming_jezebel May 28 2011, 23:07:23 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Chris is often the more violent one in fic but they do say the quiet ones are the ones to watch out for ;)

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