A new poem

Jan 11, 2006 19:47

Comments dearly wanted, I don't like the ending at all, any suggestions ( Read more... )

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the_nerd10 January 12 2006, 00:53:53 UTC
i likes it as usual
it'd strike up some conversation
the ending's fine don't worry bout it

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Nip/Tuck gnr_cate January 12 2006, 02:08:06 UTC
I love it, and if I knew the girl from Ethiopia's name, I'd shout it out, but i cant remember, and you have my dvds...
Anyways, I can clearly see the conflicts people have between acting like the "housewife or soccar mom" and wanting to look young, to be a part of a society full of shallow people...like myself
And regardless what you say, I like the ending. Because for me, it sums up plastic surgery. There is no black or white, no right or wrong.
<3 Cady

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