Comments | shangrilove: Fic: Your Heart is My Home 1/4

shangrilove

Fic: Your Heart is My Home 1/4

Jan 08, 2013 17:51

Title: Your Heart is My Home 1/4
Fandom: Football RPF
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Juan Mata
Rating: PG
Word Count: 5020
Disclaimer: These boys, and Leo and Nora, I sincerely wish.
Notes: Written for this prompt because I couldn't ignore how tenderly Juan is kissing Nora and that look in Nando's eyes as he looks at Juan. The amazing estrella on tumblr ( Read more... )

fernando are my feelings, why do i love la roja: let me count the , fernando torres, writing, romance is not dead, football makes the world go round, au (though technically everything is), liverpool love, chelsea boys are fun, sergio ramos, some people die, fanfic, juanando, juan mata, drama llama, angst makes life more interesting

Comments 8

jumping_down January 9 2013, 03:44:24 UTC

YOU POSTED IT!!! I can't wait to read. ♥

jumping_down January 9 2013, 04:03:12 UTC

I dunno why but I kept tearing up this entire story, like the accident is never mentioned, but it hangs over all the scenes in the story, even the happy ones. And ugh the sadness of Fernando and the kids who don't understand, and they're just trying to get by. :( Beautiful beautiful story as always. I love even the non-romantic parts, just Fernando getting to know new teammates and moving on. Siiigh. Can't wait to read more!

elisa88 January 9 2013, 05:48:53 UTC

I know it is like cheating, but can I ditto this comment? It is spot on.
Can't wait to read more!!! And that pic at the end, It's beautiful <3

ichbinichtot January 9 2013, 12:20:58 UTC

this is so beautiful, I can't even...
the last scene was amazing. Juan is so mature, and he seems "protective" of the kids but also of Fernando, which is so sweet... that's exactly what those three need in this particular period of their lives, someone to care for them and love them.
I can't wait to read more.

lumaste January 9 2013, 13:57:26 UTC

You're so amazing, you know. This fill along with the bakery verse was among my favorits in the kinkmeme and you're the author of both of them.
This is so heartbreakingly sad, but Juan's presence soothes the sadness and everything is so wonderful that I can't even put that into words.
I loved the inclusion of Sergio and how he's there for Nando. And I love Juan, how wonderful he is with the kids and their father.
I can't wait to read the next part. Love this fic to bits.

sparksfly7 January 10 2013, 03:38:24 UTC

i like the title ^^

this is really sweet. i can totally picture juan being this caring, nurturing nanny, and one of the reasons why fernando hasn't drowned in his grief. and ugh, nora and leo are so precious here. i would leave a longer comment but calculus has killed my brain.

i hope you write more :)

jevouskiffe January 14 2013, 02:13:14 UTC

absolutely love this! a great take on a very cute pairing, that's well written? I can't wait to read more.