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shangrilove

Fic: You're the Apple of My Pie

Feb 11, 2013 15:01

Title: You’re the Apple of My Pie
Fandom: Football RPF
Pairing: Sergio Ramos/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3781
Disclaimer: Not my boys.
Notes: Set soon after the 2011-2012 season, see bottom. This came out a lot sappier than I thought it would be, especially the last part. All my love and baked goods belong to jumping-down for inadvertently editing ( Read more... )

cesar azpilicueta, fernando are my feelings, some feelings are sappier than others, food related (nom nom), au (though technically everything is), sernando, real madrid boys are classy, fernando torres, sergio ramos, writing, fanfic, romance is not dead, football makes the world go round, chelsea boys are so cute, lets go somewhere nice

Comments 25

epsilonbrain February 11 2013, 22:14:23 UTC

Oh my god. OH MY GOD.

I know there's more soon so I'll just leave it like that.

*We really need Nando to get some cooking lessons, don't we?*

shangrilove February 13 2013, 13:50:34 UTC

Nando would be almost perfect for me... if he could cook more than omlettes. Oh how i despair, he doesn't meet my #1 criteria of being able to cook. Thanks for reading!

vitaminbjorner February 12 2013, 00:13:50 UTC

i-i-i didn't know about this fic series. how did i not know? oh well, it was a great discovery though, and aaaah, both of them (the fics and the characters, ofc) were so so sweet. I hope you continue this because Nandito baking is something i love a little too much (seriously, that commercial is one of the hottest i've ever seen. there is just something about nandito baking...) and you're writing is pretty damn awesome.

shangrilove February 13 2013, 13:51:21 UTC

I know, he's quite cute in an apron right? XD I'm glad you liked this!

lumaste February 12 2013, 16:41:41 UTC

I'm so happy you wrote a sequel! This was as sweet as the previous part. I think, I've already told you that this Fernando is one of my favorite Fernandos ever and you don't stop making him perfect. Also thanks for the video :D It was adorable, especially the part when he was sitting on the counter. He looked like such a kid.
Thanks for sharing this. Your stories are just awesome. I love them all.

shangrilove February 13 2013, 13:53:22 UTC

That part when he sits on the counter and waits... My absolutely favourite part! I think, from now on, whenever Nando is waiting for something, or on the bench, that's the expression he needs to have. Thanks for reading and the wonderful comments!

oxo33 February 12 2013, 16:57:30 UTC

I'm not sure I've left you feedback on the other part - I loved it, and this one is really great, too!

I'm such a sucker for good, well-written AUs with backstories and side characters (Juanin!), and I just love this 'verse. Sergio and Fernando seem very real and their interactions are so sweet. They warm my heart :)
Plus, the whole setup with Fer as a baker is fantastic. His commitment and his passion about his job are quite touching, and it's cool that football takes a total backseat in the story. It also helps that your writing is very good, humorous and full of feeling at the same time.

Thanks a lot for this fic, I'd love to read more!

shangrilove February 13 2013, 13:59:19 UTC

Thanks for replying! I'm glad you liked it.

I'm glad you like AUs, it's my favourite thing to write. I'm not sure why, but I always like to twist canon up until it's AU, though I leave lots of things rooted in canon. My next fic is actually a old-school Liverpool AU, I'm really excited for that. Liverpool Nando is pretty much my favourite Nando.

The thing is, I know a lot more about food than about football, so it's so much easier to write about food. Plus, I'm really bad at writing Sergio, so I try to focus on Nando instead. Besides, Nando doesn't have too much of an interest in football, while Sergio has a little more interest in food (eating!). I can't wait to introduce Pipita. He'll have so much fun with Nando.

jumping_down February 12 2013, 17:18:48 UTC

Hahahaha. I was just gonna come in here to ask you if you've seen the commercial. So I assume since the knife skills are awful in the video, then that means Fernando is doing it himself? Since if they're getting a body double anyway, they should've just gotten someone good. Did you see the masterful whisking though? Or the egg-breaking?

PS You may have failed at your computer, but this story is still a victory!

shangrilove February 13 2013, 14:07:09 UTC

Yeah, I think he's doing it himself, everything he does shows a clumsy hand. It's kind of cute, I'm glad they didn't go for a body double. Besides, who gets a body double to crack eggs and whisk stuff? That part with him on the counter... omg so adorable. He needs to sit like that when he's on the bench, on the bus, waiting for stuff...

PS. It's a good thing I accidentally sent this, or else I might've forgotten about it... like the other part of this verse that I've written.