Future Canada: Second Iteration

[shanmonster]

I've reworked my write-up on my view of future Canada. I tried to make it more positive and less denunciative, and I tried to take into account the advice you folks gave me. How does this one look?Canada can be a land in which people live together in harmony with the environment. Picture a future in which our natural resources are no longer

Comments

[clevermanka]

Looks great! Let me know if you want me to try shaving your wordcount down any more. I think the content sounds good.

[shanmonster]

The word count is under the limit, so I think I'm ok.

Thank you.

[elanya]

Yes, much more visionary, I like it :)