Fic: Trust the System (Agents of S.H.I.E.L.D.)

[shannon730]

Title: Trust The System
Author: Shannon
Rating: G
Characters Coulson, Ward, Fitz, Skye, Simmons, and May (no pairings)
Disclaimer: If you recognize it it belongs to Marvel, ABC, Joss Whedon…and anyone else involved in this show, but not me.
Spoilers: Definitely “The Hub”, and some more vague spoilers (mostly for Couslon and May) for anything that

Comments

[angelskuuipo]

Excellent job! All very in character and absolutely believable. ::thumbs up!::

[shannon730]

Thanks! It's been so long and I don't know what made me think choosing the most frustrating way to write was best by doing drabbles, but something with that ep just really hit me for writing this.

[velvetwhip]

You did a great job! Welcome back to writing!

Gabrielle

[shannon730]

Thanks!

[daria234]

I really like this! They all seem believable. I love May knowing it's crap, repeating the line anyway, and then being glad that Skye doesn't listen.

[shannon730]

Thanks! The whole episode it seemed like they were almost programmed to say it, more than actually believe it. And then as more eps aired (took me forever to actually write these), and more of May's backstory came out I realized that yeah, she may not be as much into "trust the system" as it seemed. But believing it and risking her own job to break the rules aren't the same.

[thrace_adams]

OOH I like this very much!!! So glad to see you writing again :D

[shannon730]

Thanks!

[dragonydreams]

Great to see you writing again. I thought they were all very in character. Great insights.

[shannon730]

Thanks! Don't know exactly why this particular episode hit me but it did. And I'm so glad you think they're in character. Gabrielle beta'd for grammar but doesn't watch the show so I had to hope I had that right.