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shardinian

The Personification of Elegance (One Shot)

May 29, 2009 22:36

Title: The personification of elegance
Author: Shardinian
Rating: PG-13
Rights: I own my story, and I wish I didn't.
Disclaimers: ...none.
Notes: Wrote this during SD friday night, start to finish. Muse hit me like a ton of bricks, I have no idea where it came from, and I almost wish it had never come at all.

( I'm so sorry, Boys. )

Comments 9

jenmur May 30 2009, 04:21:09 UTC

oh wow, just powerful. @~~{~

shardinian May 30 2009, 16:57:44 UTC

Thank you. I have no idea where this story came from, or why I HAD to pour it onto paper the second the muse slammed into my brain. I wish I'd never had this one at all.

jenmur June 1 2009, 04:19:22 UTC

~hugs~ i know what you mean. @~~{~

bitchweeed May 30 2009, 04:59:48 UTC

its so emotional. the fear it raises in you. thinking of what could happen to him in the ring.

shardinian May 30 2009, 16:58:41 UTC

I'm surprised to see you and Lusty back to comment! Thanks :)

I think we've all worried about this, at one time or another... Maybe that's why I had to write it. I'd post this one on EW, if it wasn't so... this.

thelustyenigma May 30 2009, 05:00:48 UTC

Very heart breaking.....

shardinian May 30 2009, 16:59:22 UTC

I still don't really want to read it again. I had to, though, since I couldn't sleep last night until I jumped out of bed, logged back in and fixed that last damn line.

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shardinian May 31 2009, 06:34:01 UTC

Thank you. I've written many a fucked-up piece of work, but this is, so far, the only one that really seems scary - and it's the only one written PG-13, with no disclaimers. Sometimes reality's potential is more terrifying than anything an imagination, even one as twisted as mine, could dream. I think the worst part of it is that it would happen just that fast. All or nothing.

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shardinian June 1 2009, 22:26:31 UTC

The guys at training would almost certainly have my ass for this piece - not for the content, per se, but just because I wrote it the way I did. I usually steer clear of using real in-ring dialect when I write, but this was almost a first-person POV piece, and from Matt's POV during a match, I almost had no choice.

When I read it, it seems almost scarier because of that alone. More real.