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Fic: No Drop of Water

Feb 26, 2009 19:07

Title: No Drop of Water
Authors: little_giddy & hariboo_smirks
Rating: PG-13
Words: ~1300
Pairing(s): gen, John/Elizabeth pre-ship.
Warning(s): spoilers for "The Last Man."
Prompt: "The Last Man". What if the Last Man was really a woman?
Summary: After a mission goes wrong Elizabeth finds herself on a desert planet, alone. Now she has to survive and try and make it back ( Read more... )

character: stargate: john sheppard, p: type: ust like you just don't know, character: stargate: rodney mckay, rating: pg-13, fanfiction: het, fanfiction, character: stargate: elizabeth weir, tv: stargate, p: sparky was sparked

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little_giddy March 2 2009, 13:01:03 UTC

Thank you so much! We wandered into a new style (I think we always do, lol) and it's great to hear that it worked.

(Also, thanks for organising the whole thing *g*)

hariboo March 3 2009, 01:58:56 UTC

I double the thanks for organising this!

odakota_rose February 26 2009, 20:15:58 UTC

"Without you, everything was lost," he whispers, "We were lost. We floundered, we teetered on the edge for years until everything was gone. Everything that mattered. You're the base code, Elizabeth."

OH, guh. This both makes me want to cry and at the same time jump up and down shouting "YES!" because that's it, in a nutshell. Everything felt so disconnected in S4 and S5.

She doesn't have any tears left in her, but she's crying for them.

I really love it when you two write- it sends me to my happy place even when it's angsty fic [don't ask how that works, it just does.] :P

little_giddy March 2 2009, 13:03:46 UTC

Thanks, hun *GLOMPS*

Everything felt so disconnected in S4 and S5.

They lost something with Elizabeth and never quite replaced it *or* acknowledged the loss properly- not going to rant on the writers, but it's undeniable.

I really love it when you two write- it sends me to my happy place even when it's angsty fic [don't ask how that works, it just does.] :P
*grin* HEE! Thank you! You just totally made my day saying that- we enjoy the process, but it's great to hear that it actually has results, too, you know? :D

odakota_rose March 3 2009, 07:36:50 UTC

*squishes* Welcome :P

And yes, I've been all ranty at the writers for such a very long time, I'm trying to let that bit go and just go back to my happy denial land *shrug*

You just totally made my day saying that- we enjoy the process, but it's great to hear that it actually has results, too, you know?

Aww, I'm glad then. Definitely good results ;D

ed_84 February 26 2009, 22:39:55 UTC

Nice! Lovely narrative!

little_giddy March 2 2009, 13:04:06 UTC

Thanks! :D

reiko_afterglow February 26 2009, 23:53:15 UTC

Eiee! I love this. And I love your use of language.

little_giddy March 2 2009, 13:04:32 UTC

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

anuna_81 February 27 2009, 06:02:37 UTC

There's this special thing about either of you two and your stories - to me they feel like paintings, things I can see and almost touch. I don't know anyone else whit style this unique and beautiful.

"Without you, everything was lost," he whispers, "We were lost. We floundered, we teetered on the edge for years until everything was gone. Everything that mattered. You're the base code, Elizabeth."

That was perfect! It's one of those lines I'm going to remeber. :)

little_giddy March 2 2009, 13:06:15 UTC

Wow, thank you very much! Dude, that's *such* a compliment - I'm speechless.

*points at HS* That line was totally HS :D I remember when she wrote it and I flailed at the screen and capslocked and wanted to hug it.