Unfinished WIP: Spark [Fullmetal Alchemist]

[sharkflip]

So there's this meme going around about posting the filenames of your WIPs and stuff, but my filenames are boring and in the interest of cleaning and organizing that's pervading my life right now, I am coming to terms with the fact that some of these WIPs will never be finished -- and that's okay.  There's several that I've been telling myself I'll

Comments

[avocado_love]

Although you lost your momentum (God, I know how that can be), I still enjoyed this. Your notes are easy to read and I can fill in the few holes you left. It's interesting to me how their life always seemed to circle one another, and how they quietly lean on one another's strength. *sigh* I choose to believe they had a quiet, romantic relationship during the events of the manga.

[wolfs_lament]

I really like the idea behind this. I have to admit while I was initially disappointed that she didn't resolve Roy and Riza's relationship when all the others seemed to pair up I did also like that it wasn't set in stone allowing people to play with it a bit. Also, I'd like to think the military policy is that couples can't work together (ie one would have to quit) so they keep it a secret or at least discrete. I did enjoy the question of whether they were actually together together in the series.

I'd be interested to see more on how they cope with Roy's blindness, which I'm guessing was to be covered a bit in 'The Promised Day.' I also really enjoyed 'Useless' even though it was mostly only notes. Thank you for publishing this! It's interesting to see how you work through the story. It would be great if you did find momentum for this again, which makes me wish I could reply with something more inspiring.