While Angels Watched: My Cup Runneth Over(Chapter 8)

Feb 13, 2013 19:23

Dean felt warmth on his face

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dearheartx0x0 February 14 2013, 02:11:09 UTC
Sooooo many emotions right now. My mom passed away here at home on Saturday and I....ugh. Reading 3 chapters in a row is just......wow. Truly amazing story. I'll leave a better comment later. <3

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sharlot1926 February 14 2013, 03:45:11 UTC
I honestly don't even quite know what to say. I'm so desperately sorry for your loss. I lost my mother 17 years ago. I am not where you are right now...but please know that I was once *there*...so I have an inkling what you are going through. I wish I could say something that would make things better for you, but we both know that I can't. So I'm sending you a long-distance *hug*. Take good care of yourself. Remember to eat. You will smile again. You will. /hugs.

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dearheartx0x0 February 14 2013, 04:21:09 UTC
Yeah I can tell u know how I'm feeling cuz eating definitely hasn't been a priority for me. Thanks so much for your kind words. <3

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thruterryseyes February 14 2013, 16:06:32 UTC
I'm so sorry about your mother.

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gypsy_atavari February 14 2013, 02:17:32 UTC
Loves so much! *hugs the boys*

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sharlot1926 February 14 2013, 03:46:21 UTC
Whee! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Happy endings are few and far between. I couldn't resist. :P

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jpgr February 14 2013, 03:41:25 UTC
Awwww!!!

Roller coaster. I was crying, tears streaming, when Dean heard John's good-bye. Smiling when Cas stood up to Zachariah. I love how you had Sam see the healing light. Oh, and when Dean called Cas a bad boy rebel, saying next thing he'd be smoling weed and having orgies, all I could picture was him in "The End" - which is what I hope you were aiming for.

Again, wonderful, magnificent job!

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sharlot1926 February 14 2013, 03:49:17 UTC
Yep, the allusion to "The End" was exactly what I was going for. I didn't really want to *name* the angel outright (although, the version that my betas saw did, in fact name him...I wound up pulling that part out because it was stilted and strained), but if people didn't know who he was, then really failed big time. ;)

So glad you enjoyed! Thanks so much for commenting and keeping me company week in and week out. You're so awesome to have done that! /hugs

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kalliel February 14 2013, 17:43:48 UTC
“Sammy wants-Sammy wants to know wh-why Heaven needs me more than he does,” he said haltingly. “M’only asking ‘cause he wanted me to ask you,” Dean said and closed his eyes again. He relaxed back into the arms of the reaper. She pet him and spoke soft, soothing words into his ear.

The angel, however, remained kneeling, poised, taut and tense like a gravestone statue bent in thought. His face reflected a deep inner struggle, striving to find a suitable answer, but there was none. None. “It doesn’t,” he said plainly. “It doesn’t,” he repeated.

OH GOD. ;____; What a lovely emotional rollercoaster this story has been. Great job, and congratulations on your final chapter! Such a wonderful accomplishment. :) Thank you for writing this~

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sharlot1926 February 15 2013, 00:24:40 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so fantastically happy that you enjoyed it. It was a joyful experience...I had a lot of fun with this one and am keen to do it again soon. :)

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kalliel February 15 2013, 00:46:26 UTC
I look forward to it!! :D

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sharlot1926 February 15 2013, 00:26:04 UTC
Thanks so much gluisa, it was a pleasure to chat with you while posting the story! I'm very glad you enjoyed.

I absolutely plan on more stories. I'm not a very fast writer, though, so it might be a while before I crank out another, but I definitely have more planned. Thanks tons!

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