jai guru deva om: nowhere man (chapter 3)

Sep 11, 2013 19:03


"Damn kid, you sound like dried crap," Bobby said.
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jpgr September 12 2013, 01:13:48 UTC
I still laugh at Dean calling them Jedis but it paints such a vivid picture of their outfits.

That last line always gets me too, even though Brad says it with total innocence.

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sharlot1926 September 12 2013, 02:24:33 UTC
Thanks so much, Deb! Hee! Yeah, I guess Dean's showing his oft-hidden nerdy side by calling them Jedis.

Yep, very ominous words there. One could almost take it for...oh...I dunno....maybe foreshadowing! Pssshh...but you know...I'm sure Dean's safe...come on...what could possibly go wrong? ;)

/hugs

kat

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tifaching September 20 2013, 20:37:15 UTC
LOL, when I read them I heard "duh duh duhnnnn...." in my head. Such awesome work. I love this story.

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sharlot1926 September 21 2013, 13:55:17 UTC
They really need to enable sound effects on LJ. That'd rock. :P

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rince1wind September 12 2013, 06:28:27 UTC
Dammit, I was hoping I'd picked this up after you'd finished posting all of it! Definitely looking forward to the next installment, though!

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sharlot1926 September 12 2013, 13:41:35 UTC
Oops...you got drawn in anyway, huh? Well...I'll be posting twice a week, regularly, so hopefully the wait will not be too long! Very, VERY glad you're enjoying it!!

Kat

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deangirl1 September 12 2013, 14:53:02 UTC
LOVE this "Nice metaphor salad, there, Hemingway" - even though I do happen to love Hemingway! Curiouser and curiouser. I'm betting we see Mei again - like when Dean escapes from the Jedi's because I know that's not going the way he thinks it is...

Can't wait for the next update!!

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sharlot1926 September 12 2013, 21:51:20 UTC
Hee! You know, I once worked as a research assistant to a professor who was writing a book about Hemingway's novel "The Old Man and the Sea". I guess Hemingway has always remained in my psyche since then. But I have never been much of a fan. LOL. Oh well...

Oh yeah, huh? It would be very convenient if Dean could just go in there and wrap up the hunt in half a day. But how fun would that be fore ME? /halo. So I'm thinking things are going to go very, very wrong. Mwahaha!

As ever, thanks so much for the sweet comment, Deangirl!

Kat

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chokousei September 12 2013, 16:09:15 UTC
There is no way Dean can do this alone, Bobby is hurt too, so hope John will come and help his son. This is the duty of a father and a hunter. Poor Dean!

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sharlot1926 September 12 2013, 21:53:10 UTC
This really is the perfect storm brewing, isn't it? This is all going to go deliciously wrong.

I mean...

Poor Dean, indeed! /woeful face!

:)

Kat

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lidia1991_an September 12 2013, 17:25:03 UTC

I'm loving it!

Hugs!

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sharlot1926 September 12 2013, 21:53:37 UTC
I'm loving it that you're loving it!

/hugs right back-atcha! :)

Kat

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