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sharlot1926

But the Days and Nights are Long (Part 2)

Dec 09, 2015 18:38

"Tuh-tuh-tuh-tastes so guh-good, Sammy," Dean says after he swallows his first mouthful of cheeseburger.
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So good!!! anonymous October 17 2016, 21:30:49 UTC

This is amazing I love it! I was crying in some parts and and I never saw the twist coming and just asfjalhafldhlhd!

Good job, good damn job :p

Re: So good!!! sharlot1926 October 18 2016, 00:20:05 UTC

Yay! I'm so, so glad you liked it! You made my night. :)

Kat

anonymous March 16 2018, 22:19:08 UTC

This was amazing and amazingly well done. I fell for it completely, even after the thought that the doublemint twins were after dean sold his soul. I need to go back and read it again now. Thank you for sharing

anonymous March 17 2018, 01:19:11 UTC

Ok i reread it and am even more in awe. You laid it all out from the beginning and then hid it was some phrasing and let the reader misdirect herself. Wonderful job, moving and thought provoking story. Thank you.

sharlot1926 March 17 2018, 04:47:15 UTC

This makes me SO happy! Oh my gosh! I had such a good time writing this...and yeah...hiding all those little hints along the way. Of course at the time I could never be sure if I'd gone too far or not...but most people seem not to have seen the twist coming, so I'm calling that a win!

I'm so glad you liked it...and so, so grateful that you took the time to let me know. You're wonderful!

Kat