Fic Snippets: What Might Have Been

[sharon28]

 Well the story for a start*G*

I found some snippets I wrote a while ago and I found some of the dialogue amusing. Since it's doubtful the fic will ever see the light of day, I decided to post what I've got.

“Hello son.”
“Dad? What are you doing here? I saw you leave with Mom.”
“Well son I suppose that all depends on where here is.”
“Where are we?”
“I

Comments

[aingeal8c]

Hee those are excellent. The first one did make me giggle. You do have to wonder.

And that's actually a good opening.

Thanks for sharing these snippets.

[sharon28]

Hee those are excellent. The first one did make me giggle. You do have to wonder.

And that's actually a good opening.

Thank you:) I've found a lot of unfinished stuff like that, where there seems to be good things in it, but it's nowhere near finished or probably ever likely to be.

[aingeal8c]

It's good to see even so.

[whitepuppy]

Wonderful! I can hear their voices while reading this.

[sharon28]

Thank you:) I'm glad you liked it*G*