Fic: Saiyuki, Food for Thought (Sanzo/Gojyo, Slash)

[sharpeslass]

Food For Thought
By Sharpeslass

Pairing: Sanzo/Gojyo
Rating: NC-17 (to be safe)
Disclaimer: Not making money. Don’t own them (but if I did. I would give this pair to Jedishampoo and keep Hakkai all for my own self).
AN: This bit of utter silliness was written for Jedishampoo, who is entirely to blame for this new and escalating obsession. Thanks a lot, dear. And thanks for

Comments

[befanini]

EXCELLENT!!!

They are both very in character, without being too much of a bastard and an asshole XD - the premise is unique, and you pulled it off very skillfully as I never got lost once as to who was thinking what.

Great mix of intensity, passion, and humor - and intelligent humor at that - a punchy ending -

and -

SO SOOOOO sexy, the way Sanzo is the Seme (eeeeee!!! XD) and whispers low to Gojyo: "Read My Mind".

EXCELLENT!

[sharpeslass]

Thank you. Jedishampoo had to talk me into posting this because I was so insecure about it, so I super appreciate the positive feedback. (Hmmm. I may just have to write another one).

I think I've mentioned I'm kind of a newbie, so I haven't read much yet except what I've beta'd for jedishampoo. I'm looking forward to reading everyone else's fiction!!!

Thanks again for the wonderful feedback and I'm so happy you liked it!

[batmarg]

I loved it! In character and sexy!

[sharpeslass]

Thanks so much for reading. Everyone is so nice here... !

(I Finally got the proper icon on here. I suck at this).

[sharpeslass]

Thanks for reading, and especially for commenting. (I live for that).

[purpleicicles]

“Read my mind, Monk,” he ground out with a grin of malicious intensity.

Gojyo was concentrating hard, channeling a year’s worth of thwarted sexual energy at his opponent.

Ungh. The repeat of "Read my mind" was waaaayyy too hot and kinky for my brain to handle. Great bitchiness throughout with the dialogue and mind-reading, and nice believable set-up! X3

[sharpeslass]

I'm so glad you liked that part. The s-e-x was what I was the most nervous about writing, not having written in this fandom before. (Jedishampoo informs me that I had the wrong man on top, but that's just how I see it).

Thanks for the positive re-inforcement!!

[purpleicicles]

I think it really worked (in terms of characterisation and sexy-scene-ness), so certainly carry on contributing to the fandom! *nudge, nudge* ^___^

[femmephantom]

Buns Without Puns=Win. XD

Very nice. I can't stop smiling.

[sharpeslass]

Yay! Thanks for the feedback!!