Mini fic! An absurd bit of flash fiction

[sharpestscalpel]

Chatting with a friend - when I tell her I'm bored, she tells me to write her flash fiction. It works out! This is Amanda Grayson fic, when she's still just dating Sarek. No warnings, nothing more explicit than her thinking about kissing. Also, food - meat, in particular

Comments

[imachar]

Oooo...lovely little bit of fic...I love the rationale behind the not-eating-meat - but this was my favourite bit

(every layer a different texture - secret hedonists, the lot of them). hee...that's exactly how I think of Vulcans

[sharpestscalpel]

THEY ARE!

HEDONISM IS LOGICAL.

*grin*

<3

I have so many comments for you and your Pike/Boyce/McCoy! I just have to have the mental energy to put words in order. Tomorrow! For sure, tomorrow.

[revena]

\o/ I'm helping!

So this is adorable. And I like that even though it's about Amanda deciding to change for a guy, it's a deciding thing, if that makes sense. Like, she knows it's an option and is choosing very deliberately.

[sharpestscalpel]

Amanda knows how to compromise - because sometimes you have to compromise. And, yay for it being deliberate and not about him pressuring her!

Thanks for poking me to write something - this weekend has been relaxing in many ways but not at all productive and you know how I get in the brain.

[yeomanrand]

I don't think it's ridiculous or absurd at all. I think it's lovely. :)

[sharpestscalpel]

Maybe it's all three of those things. *grin*

Thanks, you!

[introductory]

I love your prose. This is delicious.

[sharpestscalpel]

It was so fun to write something small and simple. I love Amanda and Sarek.

Thank you!

[secretsolitaire]

Ahhh, I would have such a hard time giving up seafood!! But this is lovely -- I like her decision-making process.

[sharpestscalpel]

I developed a shellfish allergy, so I've actually had to give up most of it - and it sucks so f-ing much, it really does. Every now and then, I'll dream about shrimp po' boys or rock lobster. *sob*

*grin*