So at the beginning, it's set up like a normal night, no big, and then... hold on, wait a minute. I love how you just plunge right into it, how frank it is.
Gabe dialogue, the way he tells the story about the kid - that was really well-done. One of the things I've liked about your writing is how well you write dialogue!
And when the boy said his name was Cash, I actually started laughing. Plus, mental image of Patrick and Cash playing Uno! XD
haha, thank you so much! dialogue is one of my favorite (and most challenging) things to write, so I'm really glad you notice and like it. as soon as I wrote about Gabe punching a kid, I thought of Cash, which is probably really weird of me, haha! again, thanks! I'm still pretty unsure about this one, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. ♥
:DDD YAY. this distracted me from the fact that cobras are playing tomorrow three hours from where I am on vacay and I can't go. but this is great. sorry i can't be all flaily as usual hon. just not in the mood. but. CASH AND PATRICK AND UNO YAY! \0/ <3
so. i have a week ahead of me that is emptyyyy. i shall try to GET SOMETHING FINISHED. D: I am a fail.
in other news. two prompts. the first is a demand (which I know you will surely oblige to) the second is a suggestion.
1. hyper!brendon/bitchy!ryan gen or hyper!girl!brendon/bitchy!ryan genderswap het. brendon really really really wants to watch high school musical, and ryan DOESN'T. (I quote, "It's an obomination to mankind". xD) 2. breakfast club!au.
haha. well, it's officially everyone-run-around-panicking-to-get-ready-for-school week around here, so there's my usual disclaimer of "it'll take me a few days." but the first one sounds hilarious and I'll get right on it. as for the second one ... how sad is it that I have never seen Breakfast Club? I mean, I know the basic idea of it, but not enough to do an AU. I should probably have an 80's movie day and see what I'm missing, haha. ♥
oh honey, GO SEE IT NOW. I only saw it recently, but it's a great movie. I could give you a brief summary if you don't want to go out and get it. and thanks. and MY usual disclaimer, TAKE YOUR TIME. ♥
hmm, I haven't listened to enough of their music to tell if I like them or not. I vaguely remember liking one of their songs, though. and ugh, the Cupcake Club fic was beyond repair. it was a complete and utter disaster. I had to scrap it. ;.; and I had really liked the idea, too, omg.
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Gabe dialogue, the way he tells the story about the kid - that was really well-done. One of the things I've liked about your writing is how well you write dialogue!
And when the boy said his name was Cash, I actually started laughing. Plus, mental image of Patrick and Cash playing Uno! XD
All in all, another great fic!
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dialogue is one of my favorite (and most challenging) things to write, so I'm really glad you notice and like it.
as soon as I wrote about Gabe punching a kid, I thought of Cash, which is probably really weird of me, haha!
again, thanks! I'm still pretty unsure about this one, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
♥
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YAY.
this distracted me from the fact that cobras are playing tomorrow three hours from where I am on vacay and I can't go.
but this is great. sorry i can't be all flaily as usual hon. just not in the mood.
but.
CASH AND PATRICK AND UNO YAY! \0/
<3
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omg, that completely sucks. but at least you're on vacaaaay!
so glad you liked it.
(and omg, your icon: ♥)
(:
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i have a week ahead of me that is emptyyyy.
i shall try to GET SOMETHING FINISHED.
D:
I am a fail.
in other news.
two prompts.
the first is a demand (which I know you will surely oblige to)
the second is a suggestion.
1.
hyper!brendon/bitchy!ryan gen
or
hyper!girl!brendon/bitchy!ryan genderswap het.
brendon really really really wants to watch high school musical, and ryan DOESN'T. (I quote, "It's an obomination to mankind". xD)
2.
breakfast club!au.
♥
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well, it's officially everyone-run-around-panicking-to-get-ready-for-school week around here, so there's my usual disclaimer of "it'll take me a few days." but the first one sounds hilarious and I'll get right on it. as for the second one ... how sad is it that I have never seen Breakfast Club? I mean, I know the basic idea of it, but not enough to do an AU. I should probably have an 80's movie day and see what I'm missing, haha. ♥
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GO SEE IT NOW.
I only saw it recently, but it's a great movie.
I could give you a brief summary if you don't want to go out and get it.
and thanks.
and MY usual disclaimer, TAKE YOUR TIME.
♥
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also, WHAT HAPPENED TO THE CUPCAKE CLUB?
it's... gone from the sidebar!!!
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and ugh, the Cupcake Club fic was beyond repair. it was a complete and utter disaster. I had to scrap it. ;.; and I had really liked the idea, too, omg.
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...I could have repairded it...
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I only know of one person now who's doing the cupcake club, and I really wanted to see more people's takes on it.
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Idk why I'm going with caps...
i loved it...and the kid being Cash was AWESOME :)
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