for a minute there (i lost myself) [1185 words] ||
shattered_ink .
PG-13: swearing.
hanna beth/ryan ross.
summary: jac sat behind them in last-period english, and somewhere in november - between finishing to kill a mockingbird and starting the catcher in the rye - she tossed a note to ryan that said look to your right, a note to hanna beth that said look to your
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I legit let out a huuuuge AWWWWWWWWW at the end! This was pretty good. (tbh, it's not my favie butit definitely has it's own char, yk? no offense. probably cuz I don't know jac/hanna too well.)
yay this so hard. welcome back, bb! ♥
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yeah, it's not my favorite thing i've written either, but i figured it was something !
& thanks, bb, it's good to be back ! ♥
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Okay, I had to get that out first. I'm glad I checked here! It's nice to see you post!
I really like the format of the story, how the narration has a sort of flow to it, like poetry. It makes it different, very interesting to read! And the little game that they play, karma police. :) Also, the end, heeee. That was sweet.
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but ANYWAYS.
:D ! it's nice to see you commenting !
i'm glad you enjoyed this ! it definitely is different; my ~style~ has mutated into something else entirely since this was written. actually, it changes every time i write something new ...
so, what have you been up to all this time? (: ♥
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Actually, I can totally relate to that, changing styles. Reading this actually inspired me to fix my super-broke master fic list up on my page (which I had attempted before, accidentally screwed up somehow, and left it "under construction" for about four months). And thanks to you, I have working links! Huzzah! But anyway, I was looking back on old things, and I realized I really had changed my style since then. I mean, it was like a year ago as well; a lot can change in that time!
As for what I've been up to, I've really been into working on original fiction lately. I can barely keep up with the ideas, to be honest. XD
It's really nice to hear from you! <3 What have you been up to?
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(oh, and now i'm feeling nostalgic and old, so i'm off to your journal to read and reminisce!) ♥
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