Empty Lots

[shayepuree]

Title: Empty Lots
Pairing: Sehun/Lu Han
Rating: pg-13
Genre: angst
Summary: There's something contradictory about long distance relationships. The sheer, unadulterated joy in the little things when they're together. Being able to reach out and take his hand, to stand shoulder to shoulder on the train, to make him buy the bubble tea since h i the

Comments

[spiritkitkat]

Gosh damn, this is one of the most beautiful Hunhan one-shots I've read on their separation! It was amazing. The writing was styled so well. I just loved how you captured the emotions between them and ugh, just my feels~!

The fight between Sehun and Luhan over the phone I have to say was one of the best. Really, it felt like something so real and that totally could happen. Just.... It felt very realistic to how people get caught up in emotions.

Because it was so feel-inducing incredible, I've added it to my fanfic recommendation list on tumblr. :)

[shayepuree]

Ah, my long distance relationship feels... Was really glad I could try to formulate them into some creative outlet. Thank you so much, both for the super sweet comment and for recommending this little fic! HunHan holds such a dear place in my heart. I need to write them some fluff soon, but the distance angst comes more easily to me. Thank you thank you thank you!!

[xxbbq]

breathtakingly beautiful and very well-written.
canon hunhan angst fics are very hard to find nowadays; i'm just so glad i came across this fic. thank you for sharing! ♥

[shayepuree]

Thank you so much! I'm really surprised there's not more canon angst about them -- it practically writes itself.

[1stepcl0ser]

this was one of the best fanfictions regarding their separation, really. i read a lot of stories about that topic, but you managed to catch the atmosphere and the emotions so well. i felt how my chest tightened up while i read this and there was something special about your story, like.. the whole atmosphere was so.. sad and i could just imagine it perfectly. i could feel and share their emotions very well.

their fight over the phone was very realistic, i think something like that could happen very easily, especially if you're feeling lonely and you tend to overreact over the smallest things.

i loved your writing style! please write more! :)

[shayepuree]

As someone who's currently in a long distance relationship, writing this came pretty naturally to me. So I guess I have an advantage over some other fic writers, in that respect, at least with this pairing. xD
Thank you so much! I'm really happy that this was able to have such an impression on you. More fics are in the works!

[1stepcl0ser]

ooh, i can see what you mean. i guess it must be tough to be in a long distance relationship, but then again there are also advantages and disadvantages, i guess.
i'm looking forward to more fics! ^^

[xfragments]

ugh this is so gorgeous. my heart breaks for them, but they're so perfect together, omg.

[shayepuree]

Agreed wholeheartedly. This ship kills me in the best way. Thank you for the kind comment!

[envybleedsgreen]

This is wonderful, really.

[shayepuree]

Thank you.