Running

Jul 06, 2011 22:51

Based off of the movie Vibrator by Ryuichi Hiroki( Read more... )

rating: r, fanfic, shinee, jongkey

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linnhe July 19 2011, 11:03:44 UTC
OKAY MY MIND IS SO BLOWN RIGHT NOW THIS STORY OMFG THIS STORY
IT IS RIGHT UP MY ALLEY I can't even begin to describe my emotions right now let me quote and try to make sense of this

I can’t remember anymore how long I’ve been crazy.
this is so tragic yet beautiful :( Key (it's Key right? I mean it's never said explicitly but that's what I saw in my mind) is beyond fucked up and I know I should feel bad for him but honestly I'm a little jealous, he sounds so free and asjqhd

It’s this delicate and faint beauty, the level of disgusting I’ve managed to reach.
I've been there and I don't understand how you're making something awful sound so glamorous

I feel light and nice inside. A small burn is left behind from the acid. I like it, it’s nice. I think I’ll try this again. I know most people probably mediate for ‘me’ time or whatever the fuck it is but I think I spend too much time alone with myself.
this read real, it's exactly how I feel when I go out and do stupid shit

I stick my feet in his face.
lolita <3

He finally wants to say ( ... )

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shayvanwinkle July 20 2011, 09:21:18 UTC
Crying right now from your comment ;___; you *sob* are so *sniffle* wonderful.
This is definitely Key. I can't explain how not fun the past two days have been and having someone actually like this story is making me feel so much better. Ugh, I've written more in this style? With this feel...I'm not sure how to explain it but I'm sure it's pretty obviously different from everything else. I didn't write it with 'this is going to be fanfiction' in mind and so I think that's what made this different and nice but I was also worried it wouldn't really translate well.

About being jealous over Key, a lot of things I sometimes wish I could recapture aren't the good parts.

If anyone tells me not to bother them/how they hate feet, mine are probably going in their face the moment I'm pissed off. I feel a lot closer with people who have had my feet in their face :D Making gross love connections through feet one day at a time.

Thank you so much for just, getting it.

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linnhe July 20 2011, 17:42:27 UTC
Bb are you having a hard time? ;_; *holds you*

I want to go on about this story but I'm having such a hard time doing it justice... It appealed to me very much. I would like to read more in this style. I want to write in this style.
:3

Oh and just so we're clear, if you put your feet in my face we're through ^^ no, seriously

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shayvanwinkle February 12 2012, 12:10:30 UTC
thank you so much!

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