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shayvanwinkle

Bad Water Bad Water

Sep 08, 2011 22:38

Title: Bad Water Bad Water
Rating: pg-13
Pairing: 2min
Genre: AU
Author/Artist Note: currently unedited, character death

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rating: pg-13, 2min

Comments 3

linnhe September 13 2011, 00:44:52 UTC

“With all due respect Sir, he’s dying, and I’m not going to let him do it alone.”
he's so mature ugh nooo I thought Minho was sick but it's Taemin I can't handle Taemin dying today

Taemin had always been strong. Confident. But now he was just a scared boy dying on a bed.
I want to curse at you now ;A;

I like this world you painted, although I feel like I'd love to see it fleshed out a little more. Like in what time are they alive, and where are they? At first I thought it might be a hospital but a hospital wouldn't have a bottle of hard liquor in a hollowed book.. and, I didn't really understand the whole children thing, were they like souls of little ones that had already died from the infected water?

Minho closed his eyes and brought his knees to his chest. He pressed his face down until his eye sockets were pushing into his kneecaps and bursts of white showed against his eyelids.
favourite line <3

allafloat October 20 2011, 07:04:55 UTC

Wow. Where do I start. This is unbelievable - slightly creepy - but mostly just coincidental. The new album by florence + the machine is currently on loop and WTWGM is my jam. Just opened itunes when I stumbled upon this piece so IMAGINE MY SHOCK WHEN I REACHED THE BOTTOM OF THE PAGE AND SAW IT WAS INSPIRED BY THE VERY SONG I WAS LISTENING TO. Goosebumps, man. Goosebumps.

Onto le fic. Again, WOW. This was so hauntingly gorgeous even from the beginning. The love and desperation between Minho and Taemin (his little brother, surprise, surprise) was so tangible and the repetition of Taemin's impending death was like a continuous punch to the gut. The mysterious sickness, the faceless children, their love that transcends their earthly life - ah, it's all heartwrenchingly beautiful ;_;

Btw I apologize if I got carried away up there lol. Listening to the song while re-reading this = awesomexinfin. *mems*

shayvanwinkle November 1 2011, 11:51:15 UTC

That is so creepy/awesome that you were listening to that song (that you like florence + the machine as well) when reading this without knowing :O and thank you so much for such a lovely comment! This story was really different for me and I’ve never killed a character off and then this one I’m all lol they both die /-_ ( ... )