"Jimmy... eye... SKY!"

Nov 27, 2004 20:09

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aworlduntothem December 1 2004, 14:36:32 UTC
Hey hey little PIPster!

I can see a number of ways this poem can be interpreted with the sky being a personification for this, that an t'other. But I'll just throw in there what reached me first and strongest :D

One of the interpretations I like here is the self-reflection upon one's own imagination. As I read it I find someone wholly confident in their abilities, it's nice to see :) Lots of famous poets have reflected on their own unique imagination and vision and the first thing that popped into mind when I read this poem was a letter by the romantic poet, Blake, to Thomas Butts in which he wrote:

What to others a trifle appears
Fills me full of smiles or tears;
For double the vision my eyes do see,
And a double vision is always with meI enjoyed your poem as a story with all the energy of a homosexual coming out of the closet and announcing to the world they're here to stay. Not to say you're like a tick-licker or anything :), simply to say it's a poem that finally shows a little bit of confidence in what you can do. Liking it, ( ... )

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she__sings December 1 2004, 18:04:01 UTC
wow, so I totally looked that comment over quickly and was like "how the hell did he get a 'coming out of the closet story' from that??" THEN I realized you were using a similie of sorts. haha. Thanks, PIP!

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