Naturally, I like it a lot, mainly the contrasting ways of viewing the narrator. I like how you've managed to present a picture of someone who is able to allow others a glimpse inside them but then becomes desperate on that dependance; and how the narrator can be seen to be either keenly perceptive of others or self-destructive.
I also like how you've managed to humanise the poem with the narrator trying to think logically throughout the poem using the whole sensory semantic field and yet pragmatically unveiling their emotional locus through the constant tone of desperation.
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I also like how you've managed to humanise the poem with the narrator trying to think logically throughout the poem using the whole sensory semantic field and yet pragmatically unveiling their emotional locus through the constant tone of desperation.
Keep 'em coming lassie.
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