Fic: Pleasurable The Poison

[she_burns1]

Title: The Curse of Connection Series
Part 2: Pleasurable The Poison
Author: she_burns1
Word Count: 6,617
Rating: Adult
Warnings: Language, sensuality, mentions of sex
Characters: Sherlock/John
Summary: Sherlock and John deal with the ramifications of the ‘curse’ as well as the secrets it revealed.
Disclaimers: I own nothing.
Author's Note: A

Comments

[anonymous]

OMG!! absolutely loved it! :-) <3 <3 please tell me there's gonna be a sequel to this one!

[musegaarid]

You managed to keep both characters amazingly sharp and in character for such a cracky premise. Kudos to you! This is really engaging and a fun read. I'm looking forward to the last part.

(And if you don't mind me channeling my inner grammar nazi!Sherlock... You shorten "it is" to "it's" correctly, but when you use the possessive "its" as in "The moment he stopped talking seemed to ring abnormally loud with its’ silence" you don't need an apostrophe after the s. This might explain it better. I wouldn't mention it at all except that it shot me out of the story every time it happened.)

[she_burns1]

OOOOOOOOoooo! Grammer help!!! *_* (stars in eyes!). My beta is good for discussion and spelling errors (I know her in rl) but not so much with the grammer!

I don't want anything that'll take someone out of the story, so thanks so much for pointing this out! I shall have to go through this mother and fix all of that! It's so hard to find an all over beta - you know - spelling, grammer, AND brit!picking!

I am glad that I managed to keep it in character, too - I always, always, always agonize over that sort of thing! Thanks for reading and especially for helping!!!! :D

[alex_lebeau]

Ohgodohgodohgod why are you not done with part three yet aarrgghh.

(Yes, I seriously just left a comment to express my absolute frustration that this AWESOME FIC does not have its third yet.)

[daiong]

Ahhh, can't wait for the next part!

It's both beautiful and hot at the same time. I love the characterization.

Especially love the scene where John's checking Sherlock's heart... isn't he such a tease!

[mal_in_np]

Amazing! Are you planning on a follow up?