Comments | shealynn88: Heroes: As the World Falls Down (Claire, Zach) PG

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Heroes: As the World Falls Down (Claire, Zach) PG

Feb 01, 2007 17:08

Title: As the World Falls Down
Author: Shealynn88
Characters/Pairings: Claire, Zach shippy if you squint
Spoilers/Warnings: mild spoilers for 'The Fix'
Word Count: ~650
Rating: PG
Summary: Claire's new knowledge makes her question everything.

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Comments 32

spread_the_fun February 2 2007, 18:24:25 UTC

Awwwwww, I love theeeeeeem ♥ And I love you for writing them ♥ And I love this, because it's really sweet and in character and amazing ♥

shealynn88 February 2 2007, 21:04:02 UTC

Ha! And I have been hearted all over! Thanks, you're very kind! I'm so glad you liked it, and the hearts are adorable...I never can figure out how to do those little things. ;)

spread_the_fun February 2 2007, 21:06:08 UTC

LOTS OF HEARTS FOR YOU :D ♥♥♥

all you do is type & hearts ; without the spaced :D

spread_the_fun February 2 2007, 21:06:25 UTC

spaces*

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rosemerry February 2 2007, 19:17:12 UTC

Oh, yay! You posted it! It's wonderful and perfect and I love it!

shealynn88 February 2 2007, 21:04:52 UTC

Thanks!!! I'm so glad you like it! :)

talk_back February 2 2007, 21:30:37 UTC

That he makes her feel real.
Perfect line to describe their realtionship. This is so bittersweet and cute.

shealynn88 February 3 2007, 02:21:58 UTC

Thanks! I've always been a big fan of relationships built on trust. And this is definitely one of those!!! :)

I'm so glad you liked it!!

sheepfairy February 4 2007, 06:02:03 UTC

Oh, so nice! I love the way she needs Zach as a lifeline, because he's something real to her. And I love what he tells her at the end, because it's all true and it's something she needs to hear.

shealynn88 February 6 2007, 20:02:26 UTC

Thanks so much! I love them so much, and I'm so afraid canons going to mess them up. :( But I'm so glad that people are enjoying! :)

dingoaction February 5 2007, 07:23:27 UTC

SO. much. love for this! Your Claire voices (both her inner commentary and what she actually says out loud) were spot-on, and you hit what I think is really the exact emotional note she's feeling right now/then.

And, in addition to all the fandomy goodness, I really love the way you wrote it. It's really tight and well-paced, and it all comes back around to Zach....OK, I've given up trying to be particularly coherent, so I hope the fact that I really liked this is coming through. Particularly the last three lines. They seem especially fantastic to me, in a heartbreaking kind of way.

shealynn88 February 6 2007, 20:04:48 UTC

Thanks! Voices are the hardest thing to make 'fit,' i think, and it's also the thing that makes a story real, so it's really important! I'm so glad you felt it worked, and that the emotion was on target. :) And I really appreciate the comments on the pacing! :) I'm so glad it worked well for you, and your comments have now officially made me all gooey inside. ;) Thanks again!