Comments | shealynn88: VM: Snowflakes Fly (V/Lamb) PG-13

shealynn88

VM: Snowflakes Fly (V/Lamb) PG-13

Nov 08, 2006 21:59

Title: Snowflakes Fly
Author: Shealynn88
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: 3x06 (missing scene)
Summary: not-quite-porn for mala (V/Lamb, obviously).
A/N: Will try to make it pornier after I move. Hopefully this will do until then. ;)

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Comments 10

monimala November 9 2006, 03:14:01 UTC

I love you, Shealynn, for writing me near-porn even when you have all this moving stuff going on. Thank you!

Guh. That was hot. I don't know what it is about the use of "bitch" in a sexually charged conversation that is SO hot. I don't like women being called bitches and hos except in situations like this because it shows us how frustrated Lamb is by her and has this undercurrent of *concern*.

shealynn88 November 9 2006, 22:13:14 UTC

You are very welcome. *hugs*

I needed a break from the moving stress, anyhow. You were a great excuse! :)

angel_grace November 9 2006, 04:01:24 UTC

This was awesome. I wanted to write monimala some cheer-up porn, but I was uninspired. So yay that you did it!

I think this was my favorite line:

It was beyond screwed up. Beyond wrong. It was right up there with bugging a confessional. Only worse, because this? Was downright enjoyable.

shealynn88 November 9 2006, 22:14:02 UTC

Thanks for reading, and commenting, and liking. :)

lissa_bear November 9 2006, 04:28:37 UTC

Dude! Dude! This is hot! And I don't even like Lamb! But I did like that scene, and I love what you've added to it. His calling her a stupid bitch, even while he's got his tongue down his throat, is perfect. You win!

shealynn88 November 10 2006, 11:57:38 UTC

I so incredibly don't like Lamb, either. But every once in a while, I dip a toe (or, ya know, fall headfirst) into that special hell of V/Lamb. :)

I'm so glad you found it hot and...YAY! I win! :) Thank you SO MUCH for commenting!

leobrat November 9 2006, 17:23:09 UTC

*Good* stuff. And I agree with monimala, only in this situation is the word 'bitch' hot! (Verrrry hot...)

shealynn88 November 10 2006, 12:00:29 UTC

Thanks!! Yeah, for some reason, when HE says it in the heat of passion...it's hot. I still don't know WHY, but I roll with it. ;)

Also, can I just say, your timing could not possibly be better?? I was in the middle of bribing my husband with dessert so that he'd let me watch that section of the episode (Lamb is his least favorite character, and he HATES when the guy is in a scene) again...and then you're post popped up on my flist and I was all...'nevermind, you do what you're doing. I've got it!!'

It was awesome. And we are obviously psychically connected. And you have saved my ass once again. :)

leobrat November 10 2006, 13:27:18 UTC

I'm totally here for saving asses. Good luck with all the moving drama, sweetie.

bonbonschnecke April 27 2011, 08:06:12 UTC

Oh my god! Thats how I like it! I need more! Have you written more of Veronica/Lamb...just not published? Please wirte more or reck me some good fics.