Arsonist Challenge

[sheelock]

Arsonist Challenge
This is in response to

#27  While his wife is away at a company function, a man decides to surprise her by cleaning the house.  In the process, he finds a passport hidden in the closet.  The face on it is hers.  The name is not.

Fandom:            OC future
Word count:      2,420
Rating:               PG
Title:                  The

Comments

[valkrys]

You may want to post a link to the story over at theoc_fiction so people can come over here and read it.

[sheelock]

As I am new to LJ I am not quite sure how to do that. I'm still learning, any help will be appreciated.

[brandywine421]

Yays! I enjoyed this very much! I really liked freaking!out!ryan!

(However I am a little confused as to why we didn't find out about the passports and IDs - I think everyone was in character up until the whole subject of the IDs was dropped...but maybe I missed it...)

[sheelock]

Yeah, I got a little bogged down with that and didn't know where to go.

[katwoman76]

double secret :)
Ryan freaking out like this was great.

[sheelock]

Thanks - I always like him a little confused.

[anonymous]

Great story... but i'm a little lost : what has the pregnancy anything to do with the fake IDs?

[sheelock]

I know I wasn't too clear on that - Taylor thought Ryan was freaking out cause he found her pregnancy test but he had really found the fake IDs.

[mel39]

What was the field work that Taylor was doing that needed her to ahve fake id's? I'm sorry, I'm confused too.

[sheelock]

Technological espionage - I know I wasn't too clear on that - got bogged down and didn't know how to finish up concisely without leaving some gaps. Sorry.

[jassylou]

Only zany Taylor could turn out to be a "Technological" spy.*rolls eyes*.
The girl is crazy fun.LOL.That's why Ryan loves her so much,and now a baby!!Awww.

This is great:D
Sorry for the late comment :)