Department Store Chapter 10 part 2

Dec 31, 2009 00:56

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sheepieluv December 31 2009, 17:40:50 UTC
I'm sorry. But-but-but we just HAD to. It's like in a drama right, when the leads FINALLY fall in love or do something sweet and then the episode ends and you're left screaming at the tv, wanting more. ... Yeah. Kind of like that.

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nao_k December 31 2009, 13:33:35 UTC
I am a BIG FAN of this story.
Please continue a.s.a.p
So sweet and amazing story...^^

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sheepieluv December 31 2009, 17:39:26 UTC
:) Thank you. We will try and have 11 up soon!

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vballgrl172 December 31 2009, 13:58:07 UTC
omg i hate you for ending it like that...we need MORE!!! Aww, poor Kyuhyun but it's Zhoumi so he shouldn't have to be scared of what he is feelin =]
i adore this story and it always puts a smile on face until it hurts to much lol

"Kyuhyun snorted, the place looked well kept enough. The counter was clean, the lights all worked, and the old condom on the floor was - wait a minute, the old condom was what. I wonder how long that’s been there, Kyuhyun thought mildly disturbed. He suddenly became very afraid for his personal hygiene."
LMAO!!!! omg that reminded me of a time when i was at a parking lot and saw a random (used?) condom on the ground. I was like O__O!!!!!

You better update soon cause i love this series so much lol <3

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sheepieluv December 31 2009, 17:38:17 UTC
Sorry for the ending, thanks for loving our story and omg yuck.

we'll try to update as soon as possible. Scouts honor.

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sakuraimiki December 31 2009, 15:00:15 UTC
OH. MY. GOD.
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HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT?
-sobs-

Moar, please? (aa) !

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sheepieluv December 31 2009, 17:35:59 UTC
I'm sorry. We just had to do it.

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thaurermellon December 31 2009, 16:10:12 UTC
Nice work :D I was surprised at how quickly this moved along, but it was entertaining. I knew his shirt would say something utterly horrible. That's why I really shouldn't buy random japanese shirts--they probably say something horribly incorrect on them. Now I really want a fruity drink. Damn. Good work...fighting!

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sheepieluv December 31 2009, 17:35:18 UTC
Thanks thaur. But you know what I think? I think it's time for you to be involved in this story, since that's what the original idea was, that we would write one together with you....so...you should just...finish this for us... :)

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thaurermellon January 1 2010, 16:09:35 UTC
Considering I wasn't involved at all in any of this, that would just ruin the story. You have just become lazy! I'm still waiting for my birthday present ;) (no rush though).

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kalchan January 2 2010, 05:47:01 UTC
but but but but but but jessica!!!! :( why does nothing we do convince you!

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