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shelbecat

FIC: In the End

Oct 09, 2008 13:57

Title: In the End
Author: shelbecat
Rating: T (aka PG-13)
Spoilers: 3x01
Summary: Written for fnl_laundrylist challenge #27, prompt #1 How did Tim and Lyla get together in the end. Did he stalk her until she caved? Did he come to church and woo her, or was it carnal need?

( It was months and months of repressed feelings bubbling to the surface and he couldn’t breathe, couldn’t think, he just did what felt right. He kissed her. )

fic, fnl

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shelbecat October 10 2008, 11:30:31 UTC

I'm so glad you like it - and I am so glad to be back too! I missed our show!

1407graymalkin October 9 2008, 16:51:19 UTC

Your reply button says Meow. Did you know this?

Anyways, I'm kinda getting over the shock of us now being Tim/Lyla shippers. Or you liking Lyla enough to write fic for her in general. But it was like ridiculously good considering this time last year we would have had to had begged for such a fic. But your Tim. Your Tim is just so Tim!

And we have Dillon back. And we live in Dillon again. And I'm blathering.

shelbecat October 10 2008, 11:32:32 UTC

Well yes, because I'm a cat, you see?

I think I need to tackle the 'she went from Jesus to you' line from Billy. 'There's Jesus...and then there's you.' That's gold.

1407graymalkin October 10 2008, 12:52:04 UTC

This morning you get to help me with prompts then.

shelbecat October 10 2008, 13:32:59 UTC

I've still only watched half - Casey is home sick today and Madagascar has taken precedence!

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kadymae October 9 2008, 17:38:11 UTC

loved the line about how his trash can never smelled so good.

Thank you.

shelbecat October 10 2008, 11:33:08 UTC

Our show! She has returned! Amazing how the mojo comes right along with it :)

tlace October 9 2008, 17:44:59 UTC

Absolutely beautiful!! Exactly what I would imagine Tim thinking/feeling and Lyla's response to the kiss was PERFECT!

*sigh*

shelbecat October 10 2008, 11:33:55 UTC

Thank you! It's so many kinds of good - how can I like Tim/Lyla!?! I think I just like the show and I'll take it however it comes!

shobhna_guerin October 9 2008, 18:19:59 UTC

Wow, it's been so long since I've read your work Sherry. And it's still unbelievably good.

I agree with the others, your characterization of Tim is spot on.

Great job, thanks for a great read! :)

shelbecat October 10 2008, 11:35:00 UTC

You are over here too!?! Are you writing? And I bet you're all grown up now too! ;)

Thanks for reading. Tim is sort of the only voice I hear when I think of FNL fic. Kind of like Michael used to be :)

shobhna_guerin October 10 2008, 14:43:07 UTC

:) I sure am! But I'm hardly in the fandom, I just read some fic when I can. And no writing at all :( Real life and college has kind of taken over everything else.

And I know exactly what you mean. What is it with Jason Katims and making us fall for tortured stonewalled boys with hair issues? :P