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shelbecat

FIC: The Trouble With Kids Is...

Nov 05, 2009 15:18

Title: The Trouble With Kids Is...
Author: shelbecat
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kris/Adam
Length: 7750 words
Disclaimer: Not mine, clearly.
Notes: ontd_ai Auction Fic for stellabee, who generously donated $76 for a 7000+ word fic. We discussed me writing kid fic, but what came out was ridiculous Adam (fun, but ridiculous). It took me over a month to get this ( Read more... )

ai, fic

Comments 89

untamedfilly November 5 2009, 22:11:33 UTC

Yay fluff!!!

Will we get more? Would really love some...

shelbecat November 5 2009, 23:25:44 UTC

I have a feeling you will get some more...Adam in the McDonalds playland!

untamedfilly November 5 2009, 23:43:57 UTC

Well, who wouldn't want some of that?

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shelbecat November 5 2009, 23:25:17 UTC

CFK? I need a dictionary for comment speak!

But I'm glad you liked it :)

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shelbecat November 6 2009, 13:16:03 UTC

LOL! So you just want me to write more of OFK - with Fuck in there? LOL! I have a feeling I will be thinking about Adam and these kids for a while to come. There may be more!

dmlpacker November 5 2009, 23:19:06 UTC

Yayyy! What an adorable fic.

On behalf of Jerakeen, I beseech you to post more :)

shelbecat November 5 2009, 23:24:36 UTC

You should know, despite my protests to the contrary, jerakeen tends to get what she wants :)

nzfan November 5 2009, 23:20:21 UTC

There are so many brilliant lines in here that I would love to quote, but really you dont need to re-read your entire story! This had some gloriously funny moments too that made me LMAO. I'm sorry to hear it took you so long to write, as I was kinda hoping you'd consider a sequel as I would love to see how their relationship develops with kids in tow! Thank you for a fantastic story.

shelbecat November 5 2009, 23:24:02 UTC

I have to admit I would like to explain exactly how Kris came to have kids with Katy and how Adam deals with his first babysitting job - can you imagine the candy he'd ply them with...and then the sugar rush!

nolechica November 5 2009, 23:42:06 UTC

Adorable, love Adam and Allison in this and disliking kids? That I understand.

shelbecat November 6 2009, 13:17:01 UTC

I never "got" kids until I had one myself - and even now I wonder how she can get in so much of a mess all the time! I think Adam would have a real blast learning more about them...

nolechica November 6 2009, 18:20:14 UTC

That's a learning experience I'll skip thanks. ;-)