You Keep Me Alive Part 4

May 15, 2010 10:35


Rating: PG
Characters:   Jack, Ianto, The Master, mention of other TW and DW characters
Spoilers: Not really any.
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything. If I did there would be some characters dead, and others alive.
Summary: During The Year That Never Was, Jack is tortured by the Master, but what is keeping Jack fighting.

PART 4 )

fic, janto, torchwood

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shelbynm May 15 2010, 21:33:01 UTC
Thank you very much I am glad you enjoyed it

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backrose_17 May 15 2010, 21:20:27 UTC
“I don’t want games tonight, Ianto. I don’t want any titles or props either. I just want you,” Jack said as his voice broke with fear. “Can I have that?”-Aww poor Jack, *hugs him.*

I love seeing their relationship threw Jack's eyes.

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shelbynm May 15 2010, 21:37:21 UTC
Thanks
In my twisted brain I always thought Jack was the one that let his feeling known, not Ianto.

My brain had a different way of seeing the two of them then most. Especially that scene on day 4 of COE.

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rift_bound May 16 2010, 06:26:14 UTC
Oh, those last two paragraphs... so sweet! I love this story. You've captured everyone's voices so perfectly. Thank you so much for posting this. Are you open to bribes for more????? *hugs*

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shelbynm May 16 2010, 06:54:55 UTC
I am seriously thinking about it but I am stuck with the next episode. If you have any ideas for it I would love to hear them.

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owensheart May 16 2010, 18:44:42 UTC
Oh my wod this was really great, I felt for JAck so much and those snamps of memory were just perfect.

I wish there was more *pouts*

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shelbynm May 17 2010, 00:32:06 UTC
Thank you very much

Like I said I might finish it for my class next semester. But I am stuck on what would happen next if I do.

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carinas_carinae May 17 2010, 04:36:12 UTC
This is so, so nice. You made a perfect ending. You can continue if you decide to, but it's perfect as is if you choose not to. I am giving you an A+ for this, by the way. :D

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shelbynm May 17 2010, 04:44:33 UTC
Thank you so very much

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