El Amante de Danza (The Lover's Dance)

[shellisproze]

Comments

[ladyinpink602]

Oh gosh this is wonderful Shelli! You have captured that magical moment in the phosphorescent sea so well.

Whispered caresses, gentle kisses,

searching for truth in the other’s eyes.

I love these lines but in truth it's hard to pick out my favourite bit because I love the whole poem. Thank you so much. :)

[shellisproze]

I don't think anyone but you and me will understand it. I did take some liberties with this one. I wanted so desperatly for their love to be consumated.

[ladyinpink602]

I wanted so desperatly for their love to be consumated.

Me too Shelli!