Unreachable, Chapter 6: Dean

[shellsanne]

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[alkthoniel]

This was *amazing*, I love every inch of it.

Just... everything about it, so hearbreaking, but ending with hope. I love Sam's quiet admission, and Dean's angry persistance, his refusal to give in and give up on our angel. And I particularly love how you make Daphne an actual person and character in her own right. She's a forgettable two dimensional footnote in the show, but here you've actually made me feel for her. Show didn't even get close.

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[shellsanne]

Thank you SOOO much for commenting! Really means everything. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the story!

[dark_austral]

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[shellsanne]

Thank you so much for commenting! I really really appreciate it. I'm so pleased you liked the story.

[daylightfire]

Wow, I say again. I loved this take on how the hallucinations would affect Cas. You used such powerful imagery and the characterization of everyone was perfect. I especially loved Sam and Dean's conversations with Cas. Beautiful and heartbreaking. Fantastic story.

[shellsanne]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! I hope to eventually add a bit more to it.

[pherber_m]

Brilliant! Poor Cas - he effectively internalizes Dean's tendency toward self-sacrifice only to have Dean himself come pry him out of his shell. It's a beautiful thing!

[shellsanne]

Yeah, it had to be Dean who pulled him out. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks so much for commenting!!

[seeking_pardon]

I love the way you write! It's very cool!

[shellsanne]

Thank you so much!