Phaiku

Jul 05, 2005 09:10

master is home -
the dog's tail
sweeps the ceiling

piny Ciceri -
two sparrows converse
in Tuskulanus

chirping silence -
listening sparrows,
their beaks half-open

but the cat, Holmes?
elementary,
my dear Watson!

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sherlock7 July 5 2005, 08:21:23 UTC
Inspiring ones, too!
Hey, YOU chose number 2 for the finals (confused!).

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sherlock7 July 5 2005, 09:37:14 UTC
So, you do like at least two out of the four, don't you?
I am scoring not that bad :-)
Hey, I remeber now that you absolutely loved the first one as well. Don't be a cheat! :-()))
My contest stuff is as miserable as I expected :-((

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