Comments | sherlock7: An Experience

sherlock7

An Experience

Mar 06, 2005 16:42

Life and Death - as combined in a pack ( Read more... )

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azbukivedi March 6 2005, 15:33:16 UTC

Increadible. Translate it.

sherlock7_r March 6 2005, 15:41:52 UTC

Increadible.

S- Meaning?

Translate it.

S- I have never translated MY OWN poetry. It's moulded in my brain in just one language.

azbukivedi March 6 2005, 17:57:03 UTC

Meaning I loved it. :))
Too bad you can't share it with those who don't speak English... :(

sherlock7_r March 6 2005, 18:49:18 UTC

Meaning I loved it. :))

S- I thought you wouldn't believe it had realy happened...

You are biased :-) Actually, its rhythm is quite lax - I had to compromise it at least a couple of times.
As to sharing, alas. Want to give it a try, btw?

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amgirl March 6 2005, 22:46:24 UTC

love it too...really feel it

sherlock7_r March 7 2005, 07:15:38 UTC

Surprise, surprise :-)

amgirl March 7 2005, 13:59:03 UTC

what????

sherlock7_r March 7 2005, 17:22:33 UTC

A rough equivalent to: "I hoped you would" :-)

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