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Prompting: Part XVII

Jun 23, 2011 21:18

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Moriarty brainwashes Sherlock to kill John anonymous July 7 2011, 05:02:02 UTC

Moriarty kidnaps Sherlock and secretly brainwashes him to respond to a set of trigger words that will only work if John says them directly to him.

One night weeks or months later, John nervously pulls Sherlock into a sweet embrace and finally tells him "I love you."

When Sherlock wakes up from a trance he's horrified to discover that the flat is completely trashed, there's blood everywhere, and John is barely clinging to life.

Re: Moriarty brainwashes Sherlock to kill John anonymous July 7 2011, 13:21:14 UTC

*wibbles*

...Someone please write it?

Re: Moriarty brainwashes Sherlock to kill John anonymous July 7 2011, 14:54:20 UTC

Oh god, this is just delicious in a horrible way.

Re: Moriarty brainwashes Sherlock to kill John anonymous July 7 2011, 22:39:15 UTC

This prompt, I love it, it had me writing music again.
It's a piece that's mainly from SPOV with flashbacks from Johns three words mingled with the guilt. Sadly I haven't got anything to record it with and I'm batshit at notes/tabs. It's written for the guitar.

Re: Moriarty brainwashes Sherlock to kill John anonymous July 8 2011, 01:04:40 UTC

OP~

Wow this is the first prompt I've ever made that inspired music composition! That I know of anyway. ; )

I'm really pleased that you were so inspired! That's wonderful!

The music must be far from happy. D:

Poor boys!

Re: Moriarty brainwashes Sherlock to kill John anonymous July 8 2011, 00:35:33 UTC

AMAZING. This must be written.

Re: Moriarty brainwashes Sherlock to kill John anonymous July 8 2011, 08:53:33 UTC

I would take the shirt off my back for the person who fills this.

Re: Moriarty brainwashes Sherlock to kill John anonymous July 10 2011, 16:04:43 UTC

D:

Don't know if I'm pulling that face because of how angsty the prompt is, or because it hasn't been filled yet.

I NEED THIS LIKE A FISH NEEDS WATER. THAT IS, A LOT.

Re: Moriarty brainwashes Sherlock to kill John fill? part 1/2? likeknowido December 29 2011, 20:53:22 UTC

Yeah okay here's me trying to do stuff for the first time, so it'll be crap but hopefully decent crap ( ... )

part 2/2? likeknowido December 29 2011, 22:27:07 UTC

That awkward moment when you leave a bunch of space at the end. Aw hell ( ... )

Re: part 3/3 likeknowido December 29 2011, 22:28:04 UTC

"Lestrade?" Sherlock's voice was distorted through the phone, but the hoarseness in his voice was unmistakeable ( ... )

Re: part 3/3 anonymous January 10 2012, 08:14:03 UTC

Wow, punch to the gut. o.o

I don't think it's crap - it's well-paced and heartbreaking and really good, especially if it's your first one. Good job!

Re: part 3/3 anonymous January 11 2012, 01:28:49 UTC

Whaaaaa?! nonono...he's not gone!
more, please??

Also --> A broken whimper interrupted him. "I don't want to think about how--help me stop... making deductions--"

*heart breaks*

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