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Prompting: Part XVIII

Jul 21, 2011 00:14

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Sherlock steals hearts. anonymous July 30 2011, 01:47:52 UTC

He practically doesn't have one of his own, so he steals them for a while then gives them back after a while so the person keeps living.

John gives him his heart after figuring it out. Sherlock, never having had someone give him one before, gives it back at night when he's sleeping only for John to give it back in the morning.

The thing about shared hearts is they keep growing bigger...

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3) anonymous August 2 2011, 01:56:54 UTC

This is magic! John feeding him a bite with a kiss is especially magic.

OP <3 you so much! Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3) anonymous August 2 2011, 18:08:48 UTC

That was, in no way, shape or form, raggedy. It was cool, edgy and warm and squeal-inducing.

I love the way you played it literal and metaphysical back and forth with the hearts- you could easily used personal objects or something else instead, and instead its, ungh, and then the shared eating/taking of the heart was so cool/awesome and yet scary-primitive! (Sorry, using too many slashes and hyphens.) And the line where John straddles Sherlock. For some damn reason the 'straddled, saddled' tickles me especially pink.

Aah, there's so much awesome in this fic! >flails happily< I'm gonna read it again and again, and be back to praise you some more if I'm not dead of squee for very long.

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3) f_m_r_l August 9 2011, 07:36:39 UTC

♥ Beautiful

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3) imhit August 27 2011, 14:25:01 UTC

Oh, wow. Gorgeous. Excellent, excellent work!

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3) nagasasu September 2 2011, 23:38:35 UTC

Oh my gosh. There's something very, very magical about this.

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (3b/3) akayalovesyaoi September 22 2011, 09:34:25 UTC

Oh God, I love this kind of insane fiction, and the last part killed me. So grotesque yet so beautiful. Fantastic story!

Re: fill: anywhere i go you go (1/3) anonymous August 2 2011, 01:52:33 UTC

I love this already.

It isn't manipulation if you always give it back. Oh, Sherlock.

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