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prompting part XXIII

Dec 25, 2011 21:12

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Once Upon A Time... anonymous December 26 2011, 07:35:12 UTC

Once upon a time, there was a little prince with a heart that was just too big for his chest.

It was strong and it was sturdy, and it pittered and it pattered. Sometimes it raced, sometimes it dropped, and sometimes it skipped, but it always continued on beating, firm and full of blood. And sometimes, it even felt like it would overwhelm his mind - which was strange, because that felt like it was often too big for the world itself. It was quite the anomaly ( ... )

Re: Once Upon A Time... anonymous December 26 2011, 07:40:18 UTC

Oh lordy lord, I think my heart just went pitter-patter. This is beautiful all on its own--you sure you don't want to take it on yourself, OP?

Re: Once Upon A Time... ilexdarkly December 26 2011, 08:46:40 UTC

Holy Christ on a cracker, this prompt is practically a story on it's own! Seconded!

Twice Upon A Time... anonymous December 26 2011, 08:52:23 UTC

And so the little prince broke his mind into pieces. Tiny ones, small ones, fractions of his mind that he was willing to share and scared to lose. Every little piece shined bright as a star, cut like a diamond, burned like lightning ( ... )

Thrice Upon A Time... anonymous December 26 2011, 08:53:32 UTC

And the soldier, looking into the eyes of the Heartless King, said "If you know the dangers so well, then you may have half of mine. I trust it in your care in exchange for a place to rest and warmth for the night ( ... )

Re: Thrice Upon A Time... ilexdarkly December 26 2011, 09:17:24 UTC

I'd say you read just the right number of fairytales if this is what you can do with them. Your story is fantastic!

Re: Thrice Upon A Time... anonymous December 26 2011, 09:40:24 UTC

goodness gracious, that was beautiful.

Re: Thrice Upon A Time... starlessnightly December 27 2011, 03:38:59 UTC

I cried. I don't usually do that, but I totally did. This story was awesome.

Re: Thrice Upon A Time... anonymous December 27 2011, 09:44:18 UTC

Oh, this is just lovely! Thank you so much. It gave me a serious case of the sniffles though.

And there's absolutely nothing wrong with reading fairytales. Where do you think this prompt came from?

-OP

Re: Thrice Upon A Time... anonymous December 28 2011, 05:23:00 UTC

There's nothing to really say except...this is a fairy tale. It's beautiful, engaging...I would read it to my kids as a legit fairy tale. Well done.

Re: Thrice Upon A Time... comma_kaze December 30 2011, 06:04:46 UTC

Oh, this was adorable. Absolutely wonderful. I have a weakness for fairy tales, I admit, and this was just beautiful.

Thank you, anon, for blessing us with it. <3

Re: Thrice Upon A Time... ilovewales January 3 2012, 01:26:11 UTC

Ohhh, this is glorious.

Re: Thrice Upon A Time... dullyelloweye January 13 2012, 01:30:44 UTC

Wow. That was just. I have this image of Sherlock and John aged about five swearing they'll be bestest friends forever now. This was really good <3

Re: Thrice Upon A Time... arwen1988 January 17 2012, 10:21:30 UTC

Very beautiful story, I was just looking around and have to stop and read...

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