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Prompting: Part II

Aug 20, 2010 19:41

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Our house is not a home bigmamag August 23 2010, 21:40:08 UTC

I so want Sherlock to think John is going to leave him because John is unhappy. John keeps spending the night at Sarah's, his internet search history has stuff like ads for flats, he stops buying milk, I dunno, just a lot of things that, on the surface, look like John is getting ready to leave. Cue Sherlock trying to be a better flatmate, like actually buying groceries, making meals, cleaning up, letting John sleep in, etc. John is creeped out and eventually draws the line at something so out of character for Sherlock that's it's ridiculous. It turns out that John, of course, isn't leaving, just staying with Sarah who is scared of being alone after being mugged on the street, finding her a new place to live, and stopped buying milk because, damn it, it's an experiment to see how long Sherlock will go without it before getting it himself.

Re: Fill part 1c bigmamag November 22 2010, 04:46:33 UTC

What she said. *points up*

Re: Fill part 1c livia_carica November 22 2010, 04:47:58 UTC

LOL, thank you :D

Re: Fill part 1c bigmamag August 26 2010, 04:05:45 UTC

"I was just thinking how…accurately you slice cheese?” He nodded and looked vaguely pleased with himself.

Ha! Oh, Sherlock is just adorable throughout all this, and John's bewilderment is pretty cute as well.

Re: Fill part 1c bigmamag August 26 2010, 16:01:37 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it. It was a good way to occupy myself for a few hours.

Being quoted is love! Thank you so much for commenting. :)

Re: Fill part 1c minttown1 August 26 2010, 18:32:32 UTC

This is awesome.

Re: Fill part 1c karesu August 26 2010, 18:42:18 UTC

“Of course. “ His eyes widened “Oh! No! Wait!” He pulled a tatty piece of paper from his jacket pocket and studied it before announcing nonchalantly, “No. I have most definitely not been through your pockets. And I don’t see what other explanation …” <3 <3 <3

This was brilliant, just saying.

Re: Fill part 1c enderwiggin24 August 27 2010, 15:05:02 UTC

that was a great fill for the prompt!

Re: Fill part 1c eva_rosen August 27 2010, 20:46:11 UTC

"Frankly, number seven was making it very difficult to observe you while you sleep.”

Oh, Sherlock, you should stop while you're ahead...

Re: Fill part 1c bigmamag August 28 2010, 04:36:05 UTC

Aw, thank you all for commenting! It really means a lot to me :D

Re: Fill part 1c q4746 September 19 2010, 22:19:26 UTC

"not the weak American stuff which I believe you once said that was analogous to having sex in a canoe"

Oh god i love you so hard for this line you have no idea! the whole thing was funny, sweet and as fluffy as one of Johns' sweaters.

John MUST be a python-head and i bet Sherlock would like there stuff too! (the galaxy song is how John teaches him about the solar system)

Re: Fill part 1c werewolfwoman October 1 2010, 20:17:08 UTC

oh yes, John would HAVE to be a python head! it just fits too perfectly the fact that the man that wrote Hitch-hikers Guide to the Galaxy also co-wrote The meaning of Liff and other python things... TO PERFECT I TELL YOU!! xD

Oh my God! Captcha is in Russian, and feckin Japanese!! How?! WHY?!

Re: Fill part 1c OA livia_carica October 2 2010, 11:14:57 UTC

He would be too! Now I have an image of the wall of 221B opening and both of them heading off to do the Galaxy Song, which I will have stuck in my head all day, but there are worse things, I suppose. :D

Re: Fill part 1c troublesize September 22 2010, 03:34:42 UTC

lol I love it!! poor, clueless sherlock!! he's trying so hard!! <3

Re: Fill part 1c livia_carica October 2 2010, 11:15:33 UTC

\o/ Thank you! :D

Re: Fill part 1c bigmamag October 2 2010, 08:10:35 UTC

Oh sweet lord, Mrs. Hudson's list killed me! I was fine for the first few, they were normal. But once the list degenerated into "don't shoot anything" and "don't put anything inedible in the fridge" I just lost it. That was fantastic! :)

Also "Frankly, number seven was making it very difficult to observe you while you sleep.”

I just love how John takes it in such a matter-of-fact longsuffering way.

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