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prompting: part iii

Sep 12, 2010 16:06

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Like Spinning Plates anonymous September 21 2010, 05:02:37 UTC

This is what happensThe train to take Mycroft home for the holidays is late. This is predictable, of course, but it doesn't stop him from being slightly irritated at the inability of certain people to organise the simplest things. He sits on his luggage and reaches for his book. The station is almost empty, now, with only a few younger boys remaing - who do not know him, but know of him, and enough not to attempt to engage in conversation - one or two older men, stockbrokers he assumes, and a young family arguing in the corner. None of whom seem to have noticed the only oddity, a small child across the other side of the platform, standing alone ( ... )

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 anonymous September 25 2010, 04:33:16 UTC

I loved this, anon. I really, really did. And I absolutely loved how you presented it with all the what-if's and not's and your Mycroft was awesome and ooohhh that section with baby Jim was perfect.

:,D

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 kira_k September 25 2010, 09:26:29 UTC

Anon, this was wonderful! Mycroft was awesome, and John and Sherlock...! ♥

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 anonymous October 2 2010, 19:37:22 UTC

This story is fantastic and deserves more comments. Beautiful and haunting.

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 raafling October 4 2010, 10:11:11 UTC

This was amazing! I love lil!Sherlock and Mycroft is just soo... Myscroft. This totally makes sense. ^^

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 innie_darling November 1 2010, 00:06:45 UTC

This is really lovely.

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 travels_in_time November 1 2010, 14:58:39 UTC

Just found this! It is beautiful. I love little alien!Sherlock and Mycroft choosing him as his brother. And the Lestrade part was sad and made me glad it really didn't happen that way. (And the Jim part, of course, but that sort of goes without saying. o_O)

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 lilyfarfalla November 2 2010, 18:05:34 UTC

Oh, this is lovely. I love how Mycroft is really the only one who could help Sherlock in the way he does. Oh man. So cool.

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 anonymous November 8 2010, 21:24:51 UTC

WHO ARE YOU WONDERFUL WRITER?

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 keerawa June 3 2012, 09:46:25 UTC

That was marvelous! I particularly liked the structure of the what did, and what did-not, and what might someday happen. And Mycroft's fascination with the impossible little boy, his distant kindness, was captivating.

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 anonymous June 3 2012, 13:27:48 UTC

Everything was perfect
I especially loved the format - the contrasts.
How I wished that you kept writing until John found out...
Perhaps you will continue this universe? It seems very interesting...

A very beutiful story in reply to a great prompt!
Well done

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 sporadic_writer March 10 2013, 19:03:03 UTC

Wow, lovely characterization of Sherlock. And the part with Jim was nicely creepy.

saki101 February 19 2014, 21:36:52 UTC

What an ethereal and whimsical touch this tale has. It certainly conveys that otherworldly point of view for the dark and the light equally. Just beautiful.

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 andell May 13 2014, 18:52:59 UTC

Brilliant story!

Dear authoranon, may I translate it into Russian, so my friends can read it too? Of course with all the credits to you.

Contact me if you see this comment, please.

Re: Like Spinning Plates pt 5/5 illereyn April 9 2015, 13:59:49 UTC

What a beautiful story!

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