Positive Dirty Talk
anonymous
October 10 2010, 17:50:30 UTC
Sherlock's had lovers who enjoyed talking dirty, calling him a whore and slut and other nasty, sexy things. Except Sherlock didn't think they were sexy, but thought that was normal, so didn't know how to tell his partners he didn't like it.
One night, John starts that, but HE notices how Sherlock flinches and closes off a bit. After that, all dirty talk in 221B Baker Street is pure compliment.
Well, unless Mrs. Hudson... but do we really WANT to know about that?
Re: Filled - Part 5/5glitteraryOctober 18 2010, 07:10:12 UTC
Ohmygod. That was tummy-tinglingly sexy. Hot and dear god, John knows how to talk during sex... And all of Sherlock's insecurities detailed and soothed so beautifully. Absolutely wonderful!
Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
October 19 2010, 05:45:53 UTC
As far as I'm concerned, this happened. Just like this.
And is it indicative of psychotic break that I want to kick a fictional character in the jimmy? Because I do. Hard. (Let's all hope it's the excessive amount of J/S fic I've been reading, shall we?)
Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
October 22 2010, 19:18:36 UTC
Exactly what the OP said about expecting John to call Sherlock those things first before changing his tune when he found out Sherlock didn't like it (which would have been sweet anyway) but like they said, your way was so much better, I love how John was going to say prize and all the nice things he says to Sherlock who completely deserves them.
Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
October 24 2010, 05:14:14 UTC
oh there are no words for how much I love this right now. Talking is a huge kink of mine, but it's so rarely done well! And this- it's utterly perfect. Sweet and sexy and just GUH. You deserve a pony!
Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
October 25 2010, 00:27:37 UTC
This is amazing. Sweet and (so unbelievably, wonderfully, fanning-self-irl) hot and just... perfect--I haven't read smut this good in a very long time. I would list all the things I adored about this but I think the OP has covered all of them up there! I'll definitely be bookmarking and reccing this! Wonderful writing.
Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
October 25 2010, 01:40:52 UTC
This is just ridiculous. First time AND dirty talking AND John dominating. This fic is everything I could ever hope for in life. I want to book a room with it. YOU ARE MY HERO WHOEVER YOU ARE!
Re: Filled - Part 5/5uptothewordsFebruary 14 2011, 22:45:49 UTC
*thanking the internet Gods for letting me find this masterpiece*
Completely agree with the above comments that this is now going in my official headcanon. Love how Sherlock kept making assumptions right from the get go but John always proved them wrong. Sherlock figured his advances would be rebuffed. They weren't. Then he figured John would want to forget the whole thing and go into a homosexual panic (like Seb). He didn't. Then during sex part deux Sherlock assumed John would talk dirty to him like the others. He didn't. I swear when I got to the "prize" line my heart literally doubled over from the love.
*squishes you forever*
Also, you need to de-anon so that I can follow you in a stalker-like manner and read everything you've ever written. XD
Re: Filled - Part 5/5
anonymous
February 21 2011, 06:20:35 UTC
This was really, really beautiful. God, how John loves Sherlock. How much he "prizes" him, unlike all those other "freaks." I adored this. Thanks so much.
One night, John starts that, but HE notices how Sherlock flinches and closes off a bit. After that, all dirty talk in 221B Baker Street is pure compliment.
Well, unless Mrs. Hudson... but do we really WANT to know about that?
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So hot and so sweet! The image played out really clear in my head and the conversations fit well too. *happy sigh* Just sweet sweet sex~~
Plz consider getting an account and writing more~~ XD
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And is it indicative of psychotic break that I want to kick a fictional character in the jimmy? Because I do. Hard. (Let's all hope it's the excessive amount of J/S fic I've been reading, shall we?)
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Also the smut was brilliant, very descriptive.
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I'll be in my bunk!!!
SQUEEE!!!
[Sorry for the incoherence - your fic is to blame.]
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Completely agree with the above comments that this is now going in my official headcanon. Love how Sherlock kept making assumptions right from the get go but John always proved them wrong. Sherlock figured his advances would be rebuffed. They weren't. Then he figured John would want to forget the whole thing and go into a homosexual panic (like Seb). He didn't. Then during sex part deux Sherlock assumed John would talk dirty to him like the others. He didn't. I swear when I got to the "prize" line my heart literally doubled over from the love.
*squishes you forever*
Also, you need to de-anon so that I can follow you in a stalker-like manner and read everything you've ever written. XD
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