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anonymous October 24 2010, 04:33:58 UTC
John/Sherlock first time. Preferably Sherlock on the bottom.

Sherlock whimpers or sobs or cries whenever he comes. That's why he hates having sex with anyone because he is, as he puts it, A high-functioning sociopath.

I want to see some embarrassed!Sherlock after he comes and John thinks he's lovely and comforts him.

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Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3 anonymous January 11 2011, 21:39:31 UTC
*huggle fic forever*

This is insanely sweet. I love your John and Sherlock so much!

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Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3 anonymous January 13 2011, 00:59:29 UTC
This has been Copied, Pasted, and Stashed in my Fic Folder, I loved everything about it. I have such a thing for scenes where someone confesses a vulnerability, and things are OK and don't get weird, awful, or shaming.

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Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3 boobabycluebaby March 19 2011, 22:09:08 UTC
Dear me, ILU anon!

The sweetness and love imbibing this fic makes me want to ROLL AROUND IN IT FOREVER!

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Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3 anonymous March 25 2012, 02:18:13 UTC
Absolutely wonderful writing. Tender and sexy and realistic and beautiful.

As someone who actually does cry anytime I orgasm I love whenever someone writes about it.

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Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) 3/3 shadowfireflame April 8 2013, 13:34:18 UTC
OMG, this was stunning! I love how Sherlock keeps apologizing for things and John's firm about telling him that he is beautiful and doesn't need to apologize for being himself. Wonderful.

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Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) Author's Notes anonymous November 11 2010, 19:02:33 UTC
The title is taken from the Sarah McLachlan song ‘Building a Mystery’. I was in the middle of writing this, and the first draft was much more lighthearted, but I just couldn’t get their voices to jive with what I wanted the fic to be. Then I was in the car with a friend and she turned this on. I’m not crazy about Sarah McLachlan, but I don’t hate her. She’s okay, but I usually like my music to have more power chords, but the lyrics hit me ( ... )

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Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) Author's Notes violetjimjams November 17 2010, 15:45:33 UTC
I think you got it across VERY well. ^^

Actually, it's not really a stretch. Lots of people have odd reactions to orgasm. Laughing or crying aren't that unusual.

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Re: Fill: So Beautiful (With an Edge of Charm) Author's Notes anonymous November 21 2010, 02:36:08 UTC
Thanks you! And I know it's not that unusual for people to have uncontrollable reactions to an orgasm like laughing or crying (I could empathize with Sherlock in this because I myself once burst into tears while I bed. It was a onetime occurance which happened as a result of a horrible, horrible day, but embarrassing no the less), and I know it's nothing to be ashamed of. But I could totally see Sherlock being upset by his reaction.

Also, thanks so much for taking the time to comment TWICE. It's always so gratifying when people are moved enough by something I write they want to let me know.

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