Reprompt time
anonymous
November 26 2010, 23:37:08 UTC
This is what happens in my head when several prompts meet up and get their grubby little paws on the key to the liquor cabinet. So. Sherlock breaks Johns heart. Utterly destroys him.
(Moriarty can't believe his luck. Here he had the misfortune to fall for Holmes' lover. His honorable upstanding loyal lover. And what does the detective do? Drive the doctor away!)
Moriarty picks up the pieces, puts John back together again(John 2.0 In stores now! Just that moral flexibility you always wanted!), takes care of him and shows John that he deserves better(namely him! Observe The Complex Courtship Displays Of The Moriarty! Example: Moriarty sees John upset about some asshole criminal/spouse beater/child abuser going free on a technicality.. He can fix that. Violently. For love. ♥). A gradually recovering John starts to reciprocate.
John and Moriarty live happilycriminally ever after.
Re: fill - Help from the dark side 1/?
anonymous
November 30 2010, 07:09:34 UTC
John felt as if his heart had melted. It was as if it was sliding down pass his stomach taking all his energy, joy and hope with it. He had built himself up for this moment. This confession. Thinking "It's ok, he must like me somewhat. He wouldn't be with me for this long for nothing. And he would at least be honest with me
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Re: fill - Help from the dark side 2/?
anonymous
November 30 2010, 07:55:53 UTC
Moriarty had men everywhere. Absolutely EVERYWHERE. And all of them one after the other called in the sighting of John Watson. At first it had been nothing. Moriarty didn't have Sherlock dancing for him, so he was only keeping security tabs and an eye out for opportunities. Some big, some small. The most simple of recent amusements being the chance to steel every single left sock from Mrs Hudson's laundry
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Re: fill - Help from the dark side one and two with corrected spelling,hopefully more to come
anonymous
November 30 2010, 10:18:12 UTC
I don't think I have quite figured out the spelling correction. It's my first time. So I ran it through word so this is all three with better spelling and grammer. Tried to post them all a once but it was two many charectors
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Re: fill - Help from the dark side two and three with corrected spelling,hopefully more to come
anonymous
November 30 2010, 10:20:52 UTC
Moriarty had men everywhere, absolutely EVERYWHERE. And all of them one after the other called in the sighting of John Watson. At first it had been nothing. Moriarty didn't have Sherlock dancing for him, so he was only keeping security tabs and an eye out for opportunities. Some big, some small, the most simple of recent amusements being the chance to steel every single left sock from Mrs Hudson's laundry
( ... )
Re: fill - Help from the dark side two and three with corrected spelling,hopefully more to come
anonymous
November 30 2010, 10:24:12 UTC
bbbbbbbbbbbbbaaaaaaaaaaaa still heaps of mistakes. Oh well. Going to bed so I write the next bit in english :) Please leave comments. I know I've said this but first time, and I wanna make sure I'm doing the prompt justice :)
Re: fill - Help from the dark side two and three with corrected spelling,hopefully more to come
anonymous
November 30 2010, 10:29:12 UTC
sorry some how missed end
One opened the door of the long black car for them, and Moriarty carried in and drained John. In the black car he laid john across the seats with Johns head on his lap. He had already informed the driver to drive softly. Still stroking John's face he said "sleep my dear, sleep". In the car's comforting warmth john fell almost instantaneously unconscious.
Less than a minute after Moriarty's car had driven away, another car pulled up rather frantically. Before it had stopped a man Called Mycroft jumped out and ran to the shore. In his first time in a panic state he ran down to the beach and looked around desperately at the now deserted beach. With a look of sheer horror at his own short coming he said "I'm too late, He's gone!"
Re: fill - Help from the dark side two and three with corrected spelling,hopefully more to cometrillsabellsDecember 10 2010, 11:11:20 UTC
The geography is... interesting
But the image of John being so tired and so broken he just leans into the first stranger he finds. And Moriarty picking him up and carrying him into the car then almost cradling him in his lap... ...that was so beautiful (beautifully tragic or tragically beautiful I can't decide) that it's going to stick with me for a long while.
Re: fill - Help from the dark side two and three with corrected spelling,hopefully more to come
anonymous
December 11 2010, 03:16:45 UTC
OMG REPLYS : ) THANK YOU will probably continue tonight, although looking at the other fill (which is pretty cool) I'm probably not able to write as much, but I will continue :)
So. Sherlock breaks Johns heart. Utterly destroys him.
(Moriarty can't believe his luck. Here he had the misfortune to fall for Holmes' lover. His honorable upstanding loyal lover. And what does the detective do? Drive the doctor away!)
Moriarty picks up the pieces, puts John back together again(John 2.0 In stores now! Just that moral flexibility you always wanted!), takes care of him and shows John that he deserves better(namely him! Observe The Complex Courtship Displays Of The Moriarty! Example: Moriarty sees John upset about some asshole criminal/spouse beater/child abuser going free on a technicality.. He can fix that. Violently. For love. ♥). A gradually recovering John starts to reciprocate.
John and Moriarty live happilycriminally ever after.
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It's okay. I can wait. *starts brweing tea*
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Can I join you? I brought scones. And I could use a good cuppa while we wait patiently for a fill.
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maybe
wish me luck :)
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One opened the door of the long black car for them, and Moriarty carried in and drained John. In the black car he laid john across the seats with Johns head on his lap. He had already informed the driver to drive softly. Still stroking John's face he said "sleep my dear, sleep". In the car's comforting warmth john fell almost instantaneously unconscious.
Less than a minute after Moriarty's car had driven away, another car pulled up rather frantically. Before it had stopped a man Called Mycroft jumped out and ran to the shore. In his first time in a panic state he ran down to the beach and looked around desperately at the now deserted beach. With a look of sheer horror at his own short coming he said "I'm too late, He's gone!"
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But the image of John being so tired and so broken he just leans into the first stranger he finds. And Moriarty picking him up and carrying him into the car then almost cradling him in his lap...
...that was so beautiful (beautifully tragic or tragically beautiful I can't decide) that it's going to stick with me for a long while.
Really hope you continue.
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