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Prompting: Part VII

Dec 06, 2010 20:40

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It's for a case... sort of... anonymous December 9 2010, 02:09:11 UTC

Sherlock drags John to one of these how-to-be-a-better-spouse workshops in order to dig up some dirt on one of the couples he knows attends. Though initially they were reluctant to open up, being that they aren't actually the couple they claim to be, they both find it surprisingly easy to fake being a married couple. Cue fake bickering turning into real bickering, and b.s. sex discussions turning into negotiations, until the case itself becomes something of an after thought.

Re: It's for a case... sort of... anonymous December 9 2010, 13:47:26 UTC

lol. Yes. This.

Seconded!

Re: It's for a case... sort of... starjenni December 10 2010, 13:35:36 UTC

OH.
OH OH OH.
This is JUST what I am looking to write.
I'm on it.

OP anonymous December 10 2010, 16:06:04 UTC

Yea!!!!

FILL starjenni December 10 2010, 16:25:18 UTC

DEAR SWEET SHINY ANON.
I HAVE FILLED IT.
Here: http://starjenni.livejournal.com/13878.html

I hope you like it, it was ever so much fun to write :)

OP is delighted! anonymous December 10 2010, 17:04:32 UTC

Oh it's totally shiny and beautiful and sweet and full of love and lols. Thank you so much. This was exactly what I was hoping for!

Re: FILL anonymous December 10 2010, 20:50:04 UTC

You are amazing and wonderful, and if I had an LJ I'd leave you a comment in your journal, but I don't, so...

Oh, this is wonderful. Simply wonderful. I love how you portray the both of them and the slow realization of their feelings. Also, their fighting was perfect. I loved that they kept shocking everyone else into silence and the way that the group leader reacted to them at first was a great foreshadowing of just how the sessions would go.

The other couples were wonderful as well. Especially the arguing couple and Mandy.

The whole thing was wonderful from start to finish. If you ever decided to write a follow up of some sort, like John meeting up with Mandy a few weeks later to talk about things or something like that, I would love you even more.

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