Fill pt 1 (not quite what you wanted...)ardenteurophileJuly 31 2010, 20:27:56 UTC
But I did begin with your prompt in mind, I swear. It's just less sextastic than I think you were looking for. Hope it's alright anyway!
i.“That... was... amazing,” he says in the back of an innocuous black cab, somewhere in the middle of London and on your way to a crime scene as usual. You’ve just finished describing how you know everything about this man without him having told you - his brother’s drinking, his military career, his entire family situation - and now, instead of being defensive or angry or embarrassed, like most people are, he thinks it is amazing
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v.You manage to get your hands on his therapist’s notes. It isn’t very difficult; you call in a few favours and, as with everything, you get what you want. People go to therapists to talk about their feelings - as you well know from your own enforced stint in therapy in your teenage years - so you’ve decided this is as good a place to start as any
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vi.Work is concrete, real. Facts can be worked out and laid out and pinned down. You concentrate on your latest case after John has stormed out, seeing no reason to fritter away the time uselessly worrying about him. There are other things to be done, more important things
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vii.It is still early when John crashes back in through the front door. You lurch out of a light and disturbed sleep at the sound, calculating it to be around 7:40 judging by the quality of the light at this time of year
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Re: Fill pt.5synekdokeeAugust 1 2010, 01:33:28 UTC
Oh my God how beautiful this is. Sherlock's desperation to just figure John out, and how upset he is by the thought of not having him anymore and just. Ugh.
Thanks so much for filling this! Given the prompt I gave I was rather expecting smut, but this was honestly wonderfull! The way its been written is...well exceptional, and you kept both of them so marvolously in character throughout! *joy*
Re: Fill pt.5lauralaitaineAugust 4 2010, 14:02:37 UTC
Oh, this was fantastic! So in character for both of them. I love how John had to explain that Sherlock could ask him for information and he would give it, he didn't need to (and shouldn't!) take it without permission. And Sherlock's bewilderment at the same. Great fill!
John's spontaneous complements are more than 'fine' in Sherlock's opinion. They're a major turn on.
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Please can someone kind do it?
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i.“That... was... amazing,” he says in the back of an innocuous black cab, somewhere in the middle of London and on your way to a crime scene as usual. You’ve just finished describing how you know everything about this man without him having told you - his brother’s drinking, his military career, his entire family situation - and now, instead of being defensive or angry or embarrassed, like most people are, he thinks it is amazing ( ... )
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Ugh.
So wonderful.
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They're very sweet. I love what you did with the prompt.
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