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Prompting: Part IX

Jan 05, 2011 23:34

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Reprompt: Hypnosis anonymous January 6 2011, 16:36:53 UTC

I prompted this last post and it didn't get filled, so I'm posting it again cos I need it like BURNING.

OK, I have a major hypnotising/brainwashing/mind-control thing going on. It's not even a kink, its a full on obssession. So give it to me. Give me ANYTHING. Hypnosis used in sex (dub-con/non-con more than welcome), as a method of torture (maybe hypnotising someone to torture someone else), to get information out of a suspect or unwilling witness, or just for funny shenanigans. Seriously. Anything. I just need this lots.

Re: Stolen Moments pt 28/28 and END anonymous January 21 2011, 18:36:20 UTC

This is so dark and so very Sherlock that I can see it happening; well done.

Re: Stolen Moments pt 28/28 and END n_anon January 28 2011, 04:33:14 UTC

woah. this was fascinating to read. i can see sherlock as a character skidding past the morality line like he did, but im relieved that he realised his mistake lol. thank you for writing this. you are becoming one of my favourite authors!

Re: Stolen Moments pt 28/28 and END darushi_chan January 31 2011, 04:38:01 UTC

See, it's that last "I love you" that gives me chills. Yes, John said he loved Sherlock earlier but it was a different type of love. How much of John did Sherlock change for John's feelings to change as well? Still, even with that, I am glad for a "happy" ending.

This story reminded me strongly of another story in which Sherlock rapes John as an "experiment." I think it's because of the way Sherlock thinks--he completely disregards John's own choice and excuses his doings by his own faulty logic. I'm just glad that in this story, Sherlock recognizes his mistake before it completely destroys his relationship with John.

All in all, I was very much glued to your story. I was unsettled and yet I still rooted for Sherlock and John to have a happy end. You did a great job on this.

Re: Stolen Moments pt 28/28 and END starjenni February 12 2011, 14:10:25 UTC

Wow, this was amazing! I was sort of glad that it had a happy ending, but I don't think it was very realistic...but I loved how you could sense that Sherlock was going to let this overwhelm him, right from the beginning. This really was brilliant :)

-- and it's ungodly in the morning velvet_mace January 8 2011, 10:01:18 UTC

I'll post up the rest tomorrow.

Re: -- and it's ungodly in the morning darthhellokitty January 8 2011, 10:48:56 UTC

I can't wait, I'm enjoying the hell out of this!

Re: -- and it's ungodly in the morning velvet_mace January 8 2011, 22:04:56 UTC

Wait no more!

Re: -- and it's ungodly in the morning s0mmerspr0ssen January 8 2011, 14:11:53 UTC

IS IT TOMORROW ALREADY???? *whiny child*

This is excellent! I love that you show the process of Sherlock's obsession growing until he is finally handed the tool that he needed. I wonder how far he will go. It seems that, at least, he is feeling some guilt over his actions so far! Hopefully, Mycroft will keep an eye on him...

Re: -- and it's ungodly in the morning velvet_mace January 8 2011, 22:05:34 UTC

It is now!

It's done and I think you got you're wish.

Re: -- and it's ungodly in the morning aynslee January 8 2011, 17:58:23 UTC

I'm really enjoyed this -- I'm on the edge of my seat! *bites fingernails*

Re: -- and it's ungodly in the morning velvet_mace January 8 2011, 22:05:58 UTC

Rest is up!

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