Sub Lestrade have a bit of a humiliation kink and would do anything for Mycroft's cock, I want him begging for it, anything to please him, would spend hours sucking, licking if he could...and Mycroft keeps calling him a whore/slut/pet.
Bonus if after the scene you show a little bit of how much they love each other.
Re: Fill: Keeping Time (4/4)
anonymous
March 10 2011, 06:19:56 UTC
I'm reading this for the second time. This is so hot and sweet. Your character voices are really good. I can imagine Mycroft saying that dialogue so well.
Re: Fill: Keeping Time (4/4)
anonymous
March 13 2011, 23:07:41 UTC
Thanks for the comment! Humiliation!kink's a funny one if it's something your partner enjoys that you just don't get - I was really glad the OP asked for the after-fluff...
Re: Fill: Keeping Time (4/4)bwblackMarch 11 2011, 21:24:18 UTC
That was great. I especially like Mycroft making him remove his belt after the whole collar/leash exchange and great bit of humor with the shirt. Some porn, some plot. Good stuff!
Late OP is very late!
anonymous
March 13 2011, 21:14:47 UTC
I ♥ YOU! You wrote everything I wanted and you made even better than I imagined!
Fuck! That was scorching hot! I love that you kept showing how excited Lestrade was with everything Mycroft was saying...
"Pathetic. I've owned dogs with better breeding. Maybe a collar and leash would help you behave?"
Lestrade couldn't help the small groan that escaped his lips.
I think I'm groaning along Lestrade;D
"For heaven's sake... Lick that off, slut."
Lestrade put his hands flat on the floor and leaned over to swipe Mycroft's footwear with his tongue.
Fuck! What is about incredibly good guy Lestrade that makes him such an appealing sub for me? I don't know but you're a GOD for giving me those scenes!
but this cock, this cock he worshipped...his pulse pounding in his ears.
Consider everything in between quoted because Lestrade finally sucking him off was a fucking masterpiece of smut;)
"You, my dear Gregory, are completely without price
( ... )
Re: Late OP is very late!
anonymous
March 13 2011, 23:18:32 UTC
Thank you for such an inspiring prompt! And such a lovely long comment is definitely better late than never! (Though Mycroft may get annoyed with your tardiness. Are you hoping for a new watch?) ;)
I liked the opportunity to explore the humiliation kink from the POV of someone who doesn't get off on dishing it out. A genuine case of "I only say these things because I love you". YKINMK happens all too often in the real world but people who love each other learn to compromise (if it's not a total turn-off).
Re: Late OP is very late!
anonymous
March 14 2011, 14:52:37 UTC
Are you hoping for a new watch?
Hahaha only if Lestrade comes along! Yet another reason why I found everything about your story perfect, I love watches, it's pretty much everybody's favorite gift in my family. In my mind Mycroft gave a very expensive Patek Philippe to Greg, and man, don't they look good together ;D
A genuine case of "I only say these things because I love you"
Exactly, I didn't actually say that Mycroft wasn't really into this kink but was doing for Lestrade but that was what I was thinking and you did show beautifully how precious Lestrade was to him.
I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
As you can see for my inability to stop bothering you I think i enjoyed all right ;)
Sub Lestrade have a bit of a humiliation kink and would do anything for Mycroft's cock, I want him begging for it, anything to please him, would spend hours sucking, licking if he could...and Mycroft keeps calling him a whore/slut/pet.
Bonus if after the scene you show a little bit of how much they love each other.
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Fuck! That was scorching hot! I love that you kept showing how excited Lestrade was with everything Mycroft was saying...
"Pathetic. I've owned dogs with better breeding. Maybe a collar and leash would help you behave?"
Lestrade couldn't help the small groan that escaped his lips.
I think I'm groaning along Lestrade;D
"For heaven's sake... Lick that off, slut."
Lestrade put his hands flat on the floor and leaned over to swipe Mycroft's footwear with his tongue.
Fuck! What is about incredibly good guy Lestrade that makes him such an appealing sub for me? I don't know but you're a GOD for giving me those scenes!
but this cock, this cock he worshipped...his pulse pounding in his ears.
Consider everything in between quoted because Lestrade finally sucking him off was a fucking masterpiece of smut;)
"You, my dear Gregory, are completely without price ( ... )
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I liked the opportunity to explore the humiliation kink from the POV of someone who doesn't get off on dishing it out. A genuine case of "I only say these things because I love you". YKINMK happens all too often in the real world but people who love each other learn to compromise (if it's not a total turn-off).
I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
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Hahaha only if Lestrade comes along! Yet another reason why I found everything about your story perfect, I love watches, it's pretty much everybody's favorite gift in my family. In my mind Mycroft gave a very expensive Patek Philippe to Greg, and man, don't they look good together ;D
A genuine case of "I only say these things because I love you"
Exactly, I didn't actually say that Mycroft wasn't really into this kink but was doing for Lestrade but that was what I was thinking and you did show beautifully how precious Lestrade was to him.
I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
As you can see for my inability to stop bothering you I think i enjoyed all right ;)
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