Fill: Keeping Time (1/4)
anonymous
March 8 2011, 00:39:12 UTC
Mycroft's chair was facing away from the door. He didn't turn as Lestrade entered the room and crossed it to stand about eight feet from the desk.
Lestrade waited... and waited. The only sound in the room was the ticking of a small carriage clock on the mantelpiece and the occasional rustle of paper from the high backed executive office chair in front of him.
Just when Lestrade thought he'd go mad if he didn't clear his throat or something, Mycroft's voice suddenly cut through the tense atmosphere. "My message was quite clear. You were instructed to be here at seven p.m."
Shit... Lestrade bit his lip. A nasty murder in Hounslow had kept him late but Mycroft wouldn't be interested in hearing any excuses.
"What time is it, Lestrade?"
He glanced down at his wrist. "It's... seven oh nine, Mr. Holmes."
Mycroft made a small Tch of disapproval as he swivelled in his chair to face Lestrade. He was consulting his own fob watch. "It is in fact seven oh seven. That cheap piece of plastic you laughingly refer to as a watch is running fast
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Re: Fill: Keeping Time (4/4)bwblackMarch 11 2011, 21:24:18 UTC
That was great. I especially like Mycroft making him remove his belt after the whole collar/leash exchange and great bit of humor with the shirt. Some porn, some plot. Good stuff!
Late OP is very late!
anonymous
March 13 2011, 21:14:47 UTC
I ♥ YOU! You wrote everything I wanted and you made even better than I imagined!
Fuck! That was scorching hot! I love that you kept showing how excited Lestrade was with everything Mycroft was saying...
"Pathetic. I've owned dogs with better breeding. Maybe a collar and leash would help you behave?"
Lestrade couldn't help the small groan that escaped his lips.
I think I'm groaning along Lestrade;D
"For heaven's sake... Lick that off, slut."
Lestrade put his hands flat on the floor and leaned over to swipe Mycroft's footwear with his tongue.
Fuck! What is about incredibly good guy Lestrade that makes him such an appealing sub for me? I don't know but you're a GOD for giving me those scenes!
but this cock, this cock he worshipped...his pulse pounding in his ears.
Consider everything in between quoted because Lestrade finally sucking him off was a fucking masterpiece of smut;)
"You, my dear Gregory, are completely without price
( ... )
Re: Late OP is very late!
anonymous
March 13 2011, 23:18:32 UTC
Thank you for such an inspiring prompt! And such a lovely long comment is definitely better late than never! (Though Mycroft may get annoyed with your tardiness. Are you hoping for a new watch?) ;)
I liked the opportunity to explore the humiliation kink from the POV of someone who doesn't get off on dishing it out. A genuine case of "I only say these things because I love you". YKINMK happens all too often in the real world but people who love each other learn to compromise (if it's not a total turn-off).
Re: Late OP is very late!
anonymous
March 14 2011, 14:52:37 UTC
Are you hoping for a new watch?
Hahaha only if Lestrade comes along! Yet another reason why I found everything about your story perfect, I love watches, it's pretty much everybody's favorite gift in my family. In my mind Mycroft gave a very expensive Patek Philippe to Greg, and man, don't they look good together ;D
A genuine case of "I only say these things because I love you"
Exactly, I didn't actually say that Mycroft wasn't really into this kink but was doing for Lestrade but that was what I was thinking and you did show beautifully how precious Lestrade was to him.
I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
As you can see for my inability to stop bothering you I think i enjoyed all right ;)
Lestrade waited... and waited. The only sound in the room was the ticking of a small carriage clock on the mantelpiece and the occasional rustle of paper from the high backed executive office chair in front of him.
Just when Lestrade thought he'd go mad if he didn't clear his throat or something, Mycroft's voice suddenly cut through the tense atmosphere. "My message was quite clear. You were instructed to be here at seven p.m."
Shit... Lestrade bit his lip. A nasty murder in Hounslow had kept him late but Mycroft wouldn't be interested in hearing any excuses.
"What time is it, Lestrade?"
He glanced down at his wrist. "It's... seven oh nine, Mr. Holmes."
Mycroft made a small Tch of disapproval as he swivelled in his chair to face Lestrade. He was consulting his own fob watch. "It is in fact seven oh seven. That cheap piece of plastic you laughingly refer to as a watch is running fast ( ... )
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Fuck! That was scorching hot! I love that you kept showing how excited Lestrade was with everything Mycroft was saying...
"Pathetic. I've owned dogs with better breeding. Maybe a collar and leash would help you behave?"
Lestrade couldn't help the small groan that escaped his lips.
I think I'm groaning along Lestrade;D
"For heaven's sake... Lick that off, slut."
Lestrade put his hands flat on the floor and leaned over to swipe Mycroft's footwear with his tongue.
Fuck! What is about incredibly good guy Lestrade that makes him such an appealing sub for me? I don't know but you're a GOD for giving me those scenes!
but this cock, this cock he worshipped...his pulse pounding in his ears.
Consider everything in between quoted because Lestrade finally sucking him off was a fucking masterpiece of smut;)
"You, my dear Gregory, are completely without price ( ... )
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I liked the opportunity to explore the humiliation kink from the POV of someone who doesn't get off on dishing it out. A genuine case of "I only say these things because I love you". YKINMK happens all too often in the real world but people who love each other learn to compromise (if it's not a total turn-off).
I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
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Hahaha only if Lestrade comes along! Yet another reason why I found everything about your story perfect, I love watches, it's pretty much everybody's favorite gift in my family. In my mind Mycroft gave a very expensive Patek Philippe to Greg, and man, don't they look good together ;D
A genuine case of "I only say these things because I love you"
Exactly, I didn't actually say that Mycroft wasn't really into this kink but was doing for Lestrade but that was what I was thinking and you did show beautifully how precious Lestrade was to him.
I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
As you can see for my inability to stop bothering you I think i enjoyed all right ;)
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