OP here. This was fantastic! Thanks so much for the story. Speaking as someone who has not a creative writing bone in my body, I've had this idea percolating in my head and it is wonderful to finally be able to read it!
This in particular was my favorite:
Did you forget your spotlight at the last crime scene?
In my head, John made Sherlock suit up. Thanks for bringing that to life, complete with Holmes-grand-standing-coat-twirling drama :D
Love! Love! Love! I especially love how Watson isn't taking any crap on the crime scene. Lovely fill! (hell, if you want to write more, I wouldn't be averse...quite the opposite in fact XD)
“You will give me your coat.” Watson says in a low voice, “You will go downstairs, and you will suit up in full. Or you will be removed from my crime scene.” Oh, John, you're so forceful. HOT. I <3 this fill, especially the last line!
OH! BAMF-Professional!John; the COAT (“I’m sure it’s a very expensive and makes you look appropriately dramatic. Give it here.” -the sounds i made-) and silverfox saying “I think he likes you.”???? I LOVE THIS. I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS FILL.
“Anderson.”
“Anderson won’t work with me.”
“He might tonight. Probably keep a civil tongue in his head, too. New head of forensics is on site to observe. Bloke named Watson.”
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This in particular was my favorite:
Did you forget your spotlight at the last crime scene?
In my head, John made Sherlock suit up. Thanks for bringing that to life, complete with Holmes-grand-standing-coat-twirling drama :D
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<3 <3 <3 <3
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Look, you can read this comment horizontal, vertical, backwards, diagonal - it'll always make perfect sense. <3
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(Oh Sherlock, don't listen to him, your coat is not ridiculous.)
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