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John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous April 15 2011, 20:15:41 UTC
Sherlock, either by illness or injury, needs a heart transplant. He ends up with John's.

Can be a darkfic (Moriarty burned out Sherlock's heart but don't worry, he found him another one!) or just sadfic (how John ends up being the donor is up to the author). If #2, Mycroft can pull the strings to get Sherlock moved to the top of the recipient list but please no sinister!Mycroft.

I just need to see how Sherlock deals with having John literally be his heart.

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Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous April 15 2011, 21:06:50 UTC
This nearly made me cry. SECONDED.

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Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous April 15 2011, 22:34:20 UTC
Oh God, this reminds me of this cruel awesome fic I once read. ;_;

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Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) minx_et_mink April 15 2011, 23:20:35 UTC
It just hurts so BEAUTIFULLY. Like the fact my friend keeps hurting her love interest in a game on accident. XD

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Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous April 16 2011, 06:23:47 UTC
How can one prompt be so sad?

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Tiny FILL! Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous May 2 2011, 04:26:18 UTC
"They gave me...John's...what?" Sherlock rasps out.

Mycroft meets his eyes willingly, which means this almost certainly isn't Mycroft's fault, which doesn't stop Sherlock from wanting to slam his fist into his brother's repulsively sombre face.

He can't, though. He's on his back in a hospital bed, covered in bandages and I.V.s, limp with exhaustion and drugs. The thing inside his chest, whatever it is, is hammering away, aching, too large for the narrow space.

"He was a match," says Mycroft, "and he was available." The softness of his voice makes Sherlock want to scream at him. Available of course means freshly killed, in the same explosion that nearly killed Sherlock. "There was precious little time to find another donor. Besides, I would have thought you'd find it rather--"

Mycroft must see something murderous in Sherlock's face, because he stops and finally, finally looks away.

Rather what? Sherlock wants to snap. Appropriate? Touching? Noble?He forms the words with his dry, cracking lips, but to his surprise nothing comes out ( ... )

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Re: Tiny FILL! Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous May 2 2011, 04:59:43 UTC
Oh, well, now I'm crying and heartbroken. Thanks very much.

Really, though, this is shattering. Well done.

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Re: Tiny FILL! Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous May 2 2011, 05:24:00 UTC
Lovely and heart-breaking :(

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Re: Tiny FILL! Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous May 2 2011, 11:21:03 UTC
WOE.

This is beautiful. And also heart-shattering. But beautiful.

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Re: Tiny FILL! Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous May 2 2011, 15:01:41 UTC
Jesus I was ok until the last two lines and then the waterworks started.

This was really well done. God I need to find some S/J fluff now.

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OP here... anonymous May 2 2011, 21:41:11 UTC
This is at once shattering and lovely, which is what I was hoping for. If you ever decide to expand it I will be thrilled beyond measure, but I am quite happy with this little jewel of beautiful tragedy. *wipes tears and reads it again*

THANK YOU! <3

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anon author anonymous May 3 2011, 00:12:59 UTC
You're welcome! Thank you for the prompt, it was heartbreaking by itself.

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Re: Tiny FILL! Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous May 3 2011, 23:07:16 UTC
Oh my God, that ENDING, I'm crying so much. Absolutely beautiful.

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Re: Tiny FILL! Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous May 12 2011, 17:00:35 UTC
Those last three lines make up what just might be the most perfect thing I've ever read in any fandom and in any fic EVER.

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Re: Tiny FILL! Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) anonymous May 13 2011, 21:22:40 UTC
Oh my. Oh. The ending--those last two lines--wow. Absolutely and completely stunning. It felt like being hit. Incredible.

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Re: Tiny FILL! Re: John is Sherlock's heart (possible trigger warning?) cuddles_and_jam November 3 2011, 00:34:25 UTC
Reposted here: Replacement

Thanks for all the comments!

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